Light born

Hello , writer here , I will publish roughly on chpt a day , if you have any comment or suggestions pls do it , the more comment are on my chapters the happier I am, and pls stone me

This shii be bussin, fr fr on god, broski.

Paradox Of Being Sukani's Return is undoubtedly my fav of all text. ain't got no words to describe how much I like Axeem's. works nay Paradox Of Being Sukani's Return. The Novel made me itch for more of her works. the content of the novel has a strong thrive and purpose which got me hooked . I'm not just giving 5 star for the sake of the author nay but for the sake of the novel's writing quality, story development, characters and characterazation and the world background which is quite detailed and suitable for the genre, bringing back the ancient taste of life with a mix of realistic fictional world. buh imma comment on the update stability which is so disappointing 😂 forgive me Munat. very disappointing you make the story so good that one has to wait a whole half a year waiting for an update 😞.  Whatever, I must say I love your work Axeema and I'll always be a avid supporter of your work. thank you Dewdrip 💙

The concept of this story is cool and very different, after reading the first chapter I'm definitely hooked. only downside is that it need more chapters lol. great read

bro, It quite good but it too fast-paced and their isn't interaction between mc and his junior sisters as well as master. And their isn't showing how he killed any son of luck.And not every son of luck or daughter are bad ,it like if you hate a human so you want to eradicate the species

We returned to a port to fix the HMS Hood up for battle when a weird crystal fell from the sky which I had never seen before but it had a slot which fitted into my quantum super computer. I placed it in then began the repair of HMS Hood when I saw a different refit option. The option was labelled space I figured it wouldn't harm to try it and used my hacking skills to activate it the crystal turned into the colours of the UK flag and HMS Hood began its conversion into Space Battlecruiser HMS Hood. The crystal presented a 1 hour countdown which we presumed correctly was how long it would take to refit the ship. Due to this long extent of time we decided to go to the school canteen where I picked up a super delicious cheese and pesto pasta as well as a good old cup of British tea. The rest of the crew then grabbed food from the canteen and subway each enjoying a complimentary cup of tea from me. Mr Ansty then entered the canteen and said he knew who I was but would not tell anyone as he had taught me for so long and didn't care if the rumours were true. I then ordered a tea as a thank you and he provided a pepperoni pizza to show his gratitude and loyalty. The rest of the crew were still unaware of my true identity at this moment but I would have to confront this at some point. I returned to the ship after spending a hour enjoying lunch. The ship looked brand new with a vibrant red base and blue stripes donned above on the sides a sold oak deck with reinforced under armour equip the top and a beautiful original looking infrastructure was on the ship. The 8 15 inch guns remained in dual turrets however had been changed to a sort of phaser weapon which was blue coloured. The turrets also had the great flag of the British Empire painted upon them which filled me with imperialist emotions. However this was not the time for such emotions I had to find Connor McAlister and beat him for his treachery against me.

Welf: Yo bell it still in the morning but you got really excited don't you.

"My memory goes back to when I first met him," he said. "A young major just out of the army and covered over with medals he got in the war. He was so hard up he had to keep on wearing his uniform because he couldn't buy some regular clothes. First time I saw him was when he come into Winebrenner's poolroom at Forty-third Street and asked for a job. He hadn't eat anything for a couple of days. 'Come on have some lunch with me,' I sid. He ate more than four dollars' worth of food in half an hour."