Kindly, I Beg You All, Please Shut Up

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

Author here.If you find this story disturbing, just know my protagonist is someone who’s never had the right parenting. His actions and thoughts, which you’re reading from his perspective, might just reflect a troubled mindset.Feel free to ask any question and don’t hesitate to state your doubts.Don’t worry. I won’t look at them!

it was good but only the writing was an issue but all in all it was a great novel.

"Hey guys, I know the answer of number 1," shouted my friend, which was in rank 1.

Feeling curious adam jumps down in front and looking closely at elder ma from head to toe.

Now, it was Rias standing against him, and she looked the most affected by the lost of her faithful pawn.

suddenly someone tap on the table...

A rectangular shaped hole was revealed, Inami's mark in a corner of the box, and a rhinoceros shaped hole in the middle. Akira held the struggling beetle and pushed it into the hole. It froze and settled in the hole as a click sound came from under him, and Akira stepped away in time before a trapdoor opened.