I love your story😁 I've only read the first 4 chapters so far, and it's really nice. One suggestion I have is for you to re check the other parts, as some of them seem to be rewritten.🙃

this is actually good. the outline has quite an upgrade.

this is great but work more on the emotions ❤️

The system implemented in the story is quite good, providing a solid foundation for the future. The world-building is impressive, creating an immersive environment that draws players in. Each location feels unique and well thought out, contributing to an engaging overall experience. Additionally, the fights are not only entertaining but also infused with a humorous vibe, thanks to the witty remarks and banter between the characters. This lightheartedness adds an extra layer of enjoyment to the combat, making it feel less serious and more fun. Overall, the combination of an effective system, rich world-building, and engaging, humorous fight sequences makes for an enjoyable experience.

This us a marvellous story. I love it. zi recommended this book highly.

this is my work and I rate myself 5 star, just because I think I deserve it.you can ask your questions here and I will do my best to respond to you. thanks for reading my work

Is this novel dropped?Will the MC become strong?

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Really nice book 💕 love it. can't wait to see how it turns out

Any novels are good specifically made by author.

Well, I don't know if I should continue with this book anymore, Webnovel rejected the contract I applied for and it seems like no one likes it since it's not getting the support I thought it would, maybe it's time to stop writing 😮u200d💨

peak book 9/11 very good burn the haters