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Melondaomaster9
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love the story but i feel like some suspense and comedy would be even better
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Great writing Barbie ππ I could truly feel every emotion abs scene . Please keep on uploading xoxo β€οΈβ€οΈ
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This book is a game-changer! The way it expertly weaves together themes of power, loyalty, and desire is nothing short of masterful. I am already expecting a relationship that is a deliciously toxic dance of push-and-pull, and I was completely obsessed with their every interaction.
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All five stars for you, author. I'm really looking forward to that drawing like a french girl. Please update moreeeeee. I'll be checking your book from time to time to check updates huhu, thank youuuu
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Author hereI'll just break it down for you guys.I'm not a fan of overly described physical aspects, I prefer describing emotions and small actions that speak more than words.I like action scenes, with powers, and explosions. There's a lot of magic stuff but also physics and real world basis for everything in the story.This is not the traditional type of God plot. They don't have subjects, they don't get worshiped -at least not all the time. This is abt normal people that became Gods, they are not evil nor saints.I'm opened for discussions. I'm obsessed with using AI to create portraits of the Four Gods.
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A captivating blend of rivalry, secrets, and unexpected romance, this story takes readers on an emotional journey where fate reunites two former enemies in the most dramatic way. With engaging twists, deep emotions, and a love born from chaos, itβs a must-read for fans of whirlwind romances and second chances! highly recommended.
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Emotional start! you a mommy gurl or mommy boy are you Author! Story is getting interesting from chapter to chapter! Keep writing...you are not allowed to slack off! I want more chapters! DO YOU UNDERSTAND! THIS IS AN ORDER! NOT A REQUEST!
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The title and description of the book dont correlate at all
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THIS IS HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! I'm not really a romance enthusiast but I gave this one a try and I'm currently at chapter 5 so my review contains spoilers from chapter 1-5.The main character, ovelia face hardships since the beginning. I would honestly like if we gave her non biological family a more screen time before we jumped on ovelia being sacrificed on chapter 1 as for us readers to develop our disdain and hatred to her family that mistreats her and also to characterized them well early on because I think we'll come back or they'll be introduced again later in the future, I think the first chapter is kinda fast paced but overall it's really great, her sister switched up is not something I expected but I still don't understand her intentions on befriending her in the beginning just to tease her in the end (maybe she acts like that because she's in front of her parents but she honestly care about ovelia? I don't know? I hope it's not as simple as she's just befriending her so that when it's the time she'll be used as sacrifice, she can insult her. This doesn't make sense to me. I hope she really cares about ovelia but just putting an act Infront of her parents)Also in the first chapter we can see ace human side and instantly wants to cherish ovelia like love at first sight but their first night instantly turns into horror as ace was consumed by his wolf side giving into his desires and losing common sense. I don't like the repetitive self explanation of ovelia with her fears, tho I want an explanation I also think it's too repetitive. Like "jolt down her spine" and "chills down my spine" something like that but it doesn't hurt the story imo. As ovelia wakes up we learned that when anna barge into her room and open her curtains showing the sunlight. I'm curious if the werewolves were afraid of sunlight just like the other movies I watched? hmmm. Also anna being marked? who marked her? I wanna know.. and marked while still being a maid? who owned her? who marked her? I need answers π₯Ή. Anna is such a sweet heart, I think it's instinctual that Ovelia felt something similarly on anna. Maybe anna is also been abused back at her home before she was sent there to werewolves palace? hmmmmm.Also ovelia, I don't known if I call her dumb/stupid or courages and brave, but her bravery of still keep preparing ace a snacks is admirable even tho we know she knows she stumbled when accidentally spill the coffee to the paper. She still prepare again and it comes to fruition UNFORTUNATELY, I smell something like a love triangle? Hmmm. Ray, bro stay away from them. I don't think this will end well, hmmm. I love your work ππ₯°. Keep it up
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Wow, really interesting prologue, it got be completely hooked, hahaha π
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...Anyway, the book seems really promising and am so looking forward to more chapters from the author...Can't wait to know what happens to Melina at the end of the novel π
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Great start to a great novel! Enjoyed the tames greatly.
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As a good come on start, the idea and the main character are very good, the comedy is fine,the time of downloading the chapters is wonderful, only the problem of clerical errors but on the whole the narration is beautiful.
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