Hostile Takeover of The Heart

..should as well leave a review on my first work, *even if it looks shameless. It’s a nice story, tbh. Though I’m the writer, I most times go back to read through it just like any other readers. I’m a fan of a slow burn book, rather than rushing through the chapters, I believe a book really hits the spot when it is unfolded at a steady pace. In case you don’t share the same thought like me, that okay, and yes, you still have a place here. I didn’t just write base on my preference but also want I’ve seen other readers enjoy. Though am a fan of slow burns, I hate it when writers drag the chapters for unnecessary reasons. I can assure you that by chapter ten, you’d already have clear view of what I’m trying to picture in my story.In summary, this is me persuading anyone reading this to give my story a chance *switch to puppy eyes* Oh and leave a review and rating too, though I’m a bit slow in updating, I’ll make sure there’s something new every week. Thanks for reading, it wasn’t supposed to be this long.

3 Reasons Why I Won't Read Such Novels:1. The description starts with the worst cliché line, which I absolutely can't stand in any novel.2. The "Face Slapping" tag.3. The main character's name is Ye. Seriously, author, are you out of your mind? Naming him Ye Ming is not only cliché, but it's also one of the most common surnames in cultivation and Chinese novels. Experienced readers can predict the entire story in an instant.

good story worthy of giving try and to add on collection.

At ch 30. Novel is okay. Well written but not my cup of tea. I don’t like the idea that MC is modern Earthling reincarnated but is willing to become a pet. I mean I understand that he had no choice at first but after he was freed for four years, he still willing go back to become a pet...like wtf...?! He has a system that literally helps make him stronger and stronger just by eating and he willingly wants to be a slave....kinda disappointing.

I’m already completely immersed in the story. The characters are vivid and authentic, and the plot keeps me captivated with every page. I can’t wait to see how it all unfolds !

Resistance:t30

I could use a little fuel myself

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