GoT Lord Frost

Oh, shit! Nowhere is it stated that there is a system, this is another novel about a nonentity who needs a system, otherwise he will die. Garbage!

So far it's an interesting story and it's giving the mysterious and sexy vibes🌚 can't wait for the updates☺️. Good job author🖤

Author’s Note:Hello, dear readers!I’m a new author, and this is my first book. Your support and feedback mean the world to me as I embark on this journey.Before diving into the story, here are a few things to keep in mind:1. No Romance or Harem: This story focuses on adventure, intrigue, and character dynamics rather than romantic subplots.2. No Overpowered Systems: There’s no "system" or instant cheats. The protagonist’s growth will be gradual, grounded, and earned through effort.Thank you again for giving this book a chance. I hope you enjoy the ride!

The story itself isn't bad but there seems to be a lot of forced interactions with the different characters that makes the story feel rigid. The MC "forgetting" that people are around when using his "secret" abilities is another problem with the story. Its really unfortunate because it kept me from truly getting attached to any characters since all interactions seemed out of place. An easy example is Connor the person he met during a raid that he "accidentally" showed his repair function to. Somehow Connor didn't even react and MC trusted that he wouldn't reveal his secrets and continued to reveal more of what he could do. The way he reacts to things just doesn't make much sense and it's rough having a dumb MC sometimes. There are also some inconsistencies early on with levels and the stats he gets per level but thats not as important if youre not looking to immerse yourself in the story. I will continue to read the story but as of now these are some pretty bad flaws.

Love the build up of the charcater Nathan Relix as he conquers his world , really touchss home

Why don't you change your book cover ? Are you still not getting contracted yet ?

Shameless Author's second account here, Honest rating:World and magic development: 3/5 Smut scene: 100/5

This is a work of real high quality. The chapters are long but cover a whole lot of ground and incorporate some excellent characters and world building. The pacing is spot on and grips the reader right from the opening chapter. Prose is colorful, original and flows really well. You can tell the work has undergone some edits as typos are almost non-existent and the sentences are structured really well. The story is still developing at the stage I am up to, but I am certainly hooked at this point and will continue with this one till the end. Top quality entertainment. A really solid novel!