Fate's Enchantment

If you’re expecting a well-thought-out story that makes sense, then you’ve come to the wrong place.As usual, this book suffers from amateur writer syndrome, where the author comes up with a good story idea but fails to consider details beyond the plot they have in mind. They try to incorporate multiple ideas from anime and good books, ultimately oversaturating the story. Sometimes, a simple, well-written beginning is better than a flashy but poorly thought-out one.As a reader, the first few chapters are the key factors in deciding whether I will continue with a story, and this book lost most of my interest from Chapter 1.I read about four chapters, and here are some of the glaring nonsensical issues I noticed:t1.tThe MC initially didn’t know his mother, but the moment he learns her name, he suddenly acts as if he remembers everything. A more strategic approach would have been to continue pretending to have amnesia and gather more information about the world from his family.t2.tThe cause of the coma was never explained, and no one even seems to care. It just happened because the plot needed it.t3.tThe first thing the MC’s mother does after checking on her son is ask if he received confirmation about getting into the academy. Seriously, what are your priorities, woman? Your son just came out of a coma.t4.tThis concerned and loving mother then decides to leave her formerly comatose and slightly amnesiac son all alone because she has an important meeting. Their family is rich—she could have at least left him with a servant, a family member, or a family friend.t5.tThe MC randomly decides to complain about the how the protagonist gets everything and he got nothing . Is the first thing you do when you get transmigrated really to obsess over being the protagonist? How narrow-minded can you be?t6.tFor some unexplained reason, the MC has an obsession with joining the main plot.t7.tThe MC goes to the black market and, for some reason, is suddenly an expert in weapons. He then randomly decides to buy a rusted sword just because it looks cool or interesting (wow, talk about dumb clichés).t8.tThe MC appears to have no skills or elemental power, yet these things are sold like groceries in the black market. So why has his multi-billionaire, loving mother never thought about buying something like this for her son? (Don’t you dare tell me she doesn’t know these things exist. No one becomes rich and influential without gaining knowledge.)So did his mother just want her son to be mediocre? Don’t say she didn’t care—she literally handed him billions without batting an eye.All in all, I just hate books that underestimate the reader’s IQ, and this book is a prime example of that.Just saying—almost all good books have a concise and well-thought-out beginning.I won’t be continuing this book, but for the readers who are sticking with it, I hope the writing logic improves.

vloxx well done . you should know me. yeah

Although this theme type is not my cup of tea , I prefer emotional drama. I have to say it's a amazing story with a intriguing plot👍

Great series so far, like the twists this story has compared to some of the common templates other urban stories might have. I enjoy the multiple layers of plots and mysteries as well that show a long term story as well as immediate sub plot that needs to be resolved. This will be one of the stories I’ll be anxiously awaiting new chapters for. Great job so far!

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not my cup of tea, mc all he does is whine, oh poor me, my life socks, you all suck, so emo mc, reading about his thoughts a real put off, you bastard serves you right.

The intro has a great intrude. The characters were well defined . Great story with lots of captivating scenes. I can't wait to finish it all . 😊🤗

I brought my face closer to the doctor. "I will soon have fun with you Doc."