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I can understand that you want to make money like who doesn't ? But are you going to drop your previous works like ICM10000× faster or ICR10000× faster cause I really love them especially the latter. Judging from the synopsis of this novel it's similar to ICR10000× faster but a little more refined so why start writing a fresh novel? A lot of authors do this on Webnovel is it a pattern ? or what? like I don't understand did your contact with them become void or what even if it's the case then maybe can start publishing it on royal road or something not just drop the book and start a new novel. Sorry 😔 for the feedback/review I just had to put this out there that like 60% of authors on Webnovel drop books and start new ones before finished the previous one and it's become common-place but still I will say thank you for continue writing I don't know what you going through or your situation but thank you.           CJ
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Patheror rated it The Joker
May 13,2025
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Hi the author here...please support me 🙏🏼 you will have daily or weekly updates of this novel
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Patheror rated it Greatest God Li Ma
May 13,2025
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Looks good, I like it so far.I’ve read SSS Villains return, and I love it, and I’ve also read Healing System which wasn’t my favorite, but can see the author improving.There is one thing in this Authors novels that I just love, and it’s the characters and their humor.
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Patheror rated it Fate's Enchantment
May 13,2025
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If you’re expecting a well-thought-out story that makes sense, then you’ve come to the wrong place.As usual, this book suffers from amateur writer syndrome, where the author comes up with a good story idea but fails to consider details beyond the plot they have in mind. They try to incorporate multiple ideas from anime and good books, ultimately oversaturating the story. Sometimes, a simple, well-written beginning is better than a flashy but poorly thought-out one.As a reader, the first few chapters are the key factors in deciding whether I will continue with a story, and this book lost most of my interest from Chapter 1.I read about four chapters, and here are some of the glaring nonsensical issues I noticed:t1.tThe MC initially didn’t know his mother, but the moment he learns her name, he suddenly acts as if he remembers everything. A more strategic approach would have been to continue pretending to have amnesia and gather more information about the world from his family.t2.tThe cause of the coma was never explained, and no one even seems to care. It just happened because the plot needed it.t3.tThe first thing the MC’s mother does after checking on her son is ask if he received confirmation about getting into the academy. Seriously, what are your priorities, woman? Your son just came out of a coma.t4.tThis concerned and loving mother then decides to leave her formerly comatose and slightly amnesiac son all alone because she has an important meeting. Their family is rich—she could have at least left him with a servant, a family member, or a family friend.t5.tThe MC randomly decides to complain about the how the protagonist gets everything and he got nothing . Is the first thing you do when you get transmigrated really to obsess over being the protagonist? How narrow-minded can you be?t6.tFor some unexplained reason, the MC has an obsession with joining the main plot.t7.tThe MC goes to the black market and, for some reason, is suddenly an expert in weapons. He then randomly decides to buy a rusted sword just because it looks cool or interesting (wow, talk about dumb clichés).t8.tThe MC appears to have no skills or elemental power, yet these things are sold like groceries in the black market. So why has his multi-billionaire, loving mother never thought about buying something like this for her son? (Don’t you dare tell me she doesn’t know these things exist. No one becomes rich and influential without gaining knowledge.)So did his mother just want her son to be mediocre? Don’t say she didn’t care—she literally handed him billions without batting an eye.All in all, I just hate books that underestimate the reader’s IQ, and this book is a prime example of that.Just saying—almost all good books have a concise and well-thought-out beginning.I won’t be continuing this book, but for the readers who are sticking with it, I hope the writing logic improves.
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This book is very good, telling the story of a little boy living in China in the world of cultivation and the urban world
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Patheror rated it Edit Story Cover
May 13,2025
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Shameless self review. Writing this is fun I feel like I’m improving.
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Patheror rated it My-SunWarrior system
May 12,2025
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I just simply like how the story's built!
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Patheror rated it Demon Wolf System
May 12,2025
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can author atleast make a non harem story after you're done with this?this and malevolent warlock are both really good, just that I don't do well with harems.
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I read Arthur novel but this is my favourite 😊😊😊😊 i like the but these chapters are small
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Patheror rated it Chronicles of the Architect
May 12,2025
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First few chapters gave me the urge to read more. I like Baldwin character, the character building is good. I'm curious on what's next to come on next chapters.
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Patheror rated it Create: God's Gift
May 12,2025
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Need more, looks like an upcoming rival for Chrysalis. Great start. Keep it going :)
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Patheror rated it A Simple Record
May 12,2025
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:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) good.
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