Dragon Knight Rises Of Draco

The characters are alive. That's the only thing I can say in this book aside from a complex story that was written well.There are some sudden shifts in perspectives but it does not bother the reader at all. It's an innocent mistake from a newbie author. Keep it up author, you can do it!I feel like Aidan has a reason why he's bullying his twin brother, Lucian. The story is so intriguing and engaging that I forgot this is a work of fiction. I'll be waiting for the next updates.

good keep it up with.   ..   ..  .  .. .. ..

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

I grinned a mega watt grin    this is so awesome

When Alaric and Lilith were back from Alaric mindset they stood there as they both were thinking about something.

Takashi nodded, "But I don't know the address to your house. In fact the only way I got there was because I was led there."

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Hello, I am GODDESS, I want to say thank you for saving my child because of your sacrifice, my child can survive. If not because of you maybe my child would not get into the act of activating the artifact that I gave for her to call me. At men who kidnapping my child is The Evil Goddess men she always looking for trouble to make me want fight her to prove who is the best because of it Evil Goddess want to kidnapping my children. so thank to you i don't have fight her so for reward I decided to revive you but because of your world used to have rules for GOD and GODDES not being able to use their power to awaken humans I decided to moved you to a new world where the technology is the same as technology in the previous world and also in this world there are creatures like Angel, Fallen Angel, Devi, Yokai, Dragon , and other fantasy creatures but they hide from human social life because of that I give the power of 'The Gamer' so you can survive in this world and have fun in this world.