It’s not bad but it’s kind of hard to read

A good book, worth reading. happy reading...

This Shameless Author is back!!! Try reading this one! I'm sure you'll absolutely love this. If you want a villain story progression, you will like this one. This is inspired by cultivation novels, like ergen's outside of time and more. Just a heads up, don't expect a quick strong main character, as he also struggles from the cruel world, which eventually leads him to be a villain.

The characters are alive. That's the only thing I can say in this book aside from a complex story that was written well.There are some sudden shifts in perspectives but it does not bother the reader at all. It's an innocent mistake from a newbie author. Keep it up author, you can do it!I feel like Aidan has a reason why he's bullying his twin brother, Lucian. The story is so intriguing and engaging that I forgot this is a work of fiction. I'll be waiting for the next updates.

5/5 stars no drama ✨ So firstly congratulations on starting a new seventh book author San!!! i internally screamed when i was notified huhuhu! so now for actual lengthy review the writing quality is topnotch as always. i like the flow of chapters which are somewhat refreshing and funny while still witty and a hint of tension. OFFICIALLY LOVE OUR MANBUN HUBBY. They're soo cute and we can already see the dynamics and can't wait for more! Over I Like how progressive our female lead is. She has endured so much and can't wait for her to gobsmack her parents. I'll probably leave another review once I'm more into the story but for now, one of the best things that happened in 2025.

This is a complex story with lots of emotions behind it. Enjoy the use of mythology as well.

The story is really interesting and beautiful! I see that the Author(s) have mixed various tropes. I hope that this one is really going to be interesting.

So far, I’m currently at the start of chapter 11 but before I read, I’m happy with how the story is progressing, the characters, and how the author gives details that puts your mind into the story. There are some repeating wording within the first few chapters, but other than that, I’m excited for more!! This has so much potiential!

story was going fine and was enjoying him building his own town but then the fiancé is introduced, and it felt like the whole story was ruined. everyone finds her perfect and it instantly becomes forced and unbearable quickly.why im dropping.1st his fiance is also a reincarnated.2nd he is already what feels like the peak of ability.3rd he is 10 years old and he is introducing cars trains, electricity and more to the world in what i believe has only been less than a year.4th everyone instantly becomes dumb around the mc and none find anything odd when he pulls the impossible out his ahh.5th similar to reason 3 everything feels super rushed and forced plot, romance, dialogue. ... maybe come back to check out future chapters if anything changes in a year but doubt it.

Shameless author here giving himself a Five star rating. This is mostly an outline. But you will be able to understand what is going on from different chapters. I will take any advise, ideas and anything else. Hope you all enjoy the story.

The story is interesting, nice plot and all. Only problem is, the names are being mixed up so many time can get pretty annoying. It throws off readers from the story just to find out who the author is writing about.

later when the companies develop you should let him enter the electronic business and control the telephone business