disastrous love

Engaging and unrushed though not without flaws the novel's strengths are enough to cover for its weaknesses.The pacing is unrushed and smooth this applies to character and world building as well as story.Character interactions and conversational quips need a little work to not sound so awkward and some gaps needs to be filled in to not sound like theres missing info and implications from the dialogue. All seem believable enough so far, but theres definitely room for improvement.Theres good effort put into developments outside of the main character's purview and the machinations beyond the personal level provides good world building and flavour.The author is patient and doesnt hand everything to the main character. This applies to powers, items, relationships, trust of side characters, etc though some interactions are a bit heavy handed.Definitely a novel with a solid foundation that makes me anticipate what comes next. I hope the author remains consistent.

At the time of this review, there are only 31 chapters. From what has been released so far, I can say a great idea and story. Now with only 30+ chapters there's not been a super ton of plot development. However, what has happened is detailed, thought out, interesting, and enjoyable. The characters are diverse, and realistic. The author is blending sci-fi, fantasy(my opinion), dystopian, supernatural, and cultivation into a piece of art. The only flaw I can see at this time is that the Levels or Ranks are not full defined yet. We get a general view but it is still unclear at this time. I expect as the story progresses that this aspect will become clear, but at this point it is still muddy. This is something that might bother new readers coming into this story. Having said that, it really doesn't matter this early in the story because of everything else that is happening. TRY. If you do anything else just try the story. If you give it a chance you'll find yourself emersed into a captivating world. You have nothing to lose by trying. This author is a incredible story teller that will suck you in and not let go. This is purely my opinion. Try and decide for yourself if it is worth it or not. Thanks for giving us this gift of a story.

And all that glitters is gold

In deep thoughts, Jiao Jiang didn't notice the arrival of someone...

As more and more morbid, dreadful thoughts littered Saiph's brain, the unfolding inaction resounding in his heart felt wrong, somehow.

But I wasn't worried as i knew that he would not fail, then as the flame touched Bibi dongs body no scream came out instead there was a slight look of discomfort on her face. Then the flames slowly disappeared overtime revealing that the poison was cured. Bibi dongs eyes began to twitch and opened only to see a Yu Xiaogang who was crying while looking at her in the eyes. "Xiaogang why are you crying.

Kahime: Author! Kenapa tiba-tiba ceritanya jadi gini?! Malu-malu'in tahu?! 😣

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