Children of Gehenna

Gosh the MC is a mushroom, now that's something new I haven't seen in web novel before, I'll say it's cool lol 😆 but I wonder how week the mushroom is going to be though

Just started this year so I a new Author on Webnovel, I promise to not drop the book but for a while updates would be slow.

Hey guys its the author here. This message is just to tell all of the readers who happen to run into my book. If you enjoy it please add it to your collection and give me a review. If there anything I can improve in my work, please let me know as well. Thanks :))

It’s an enjoyable read but there are a few issues I have with it. First, they introduced Lila as one of the love interest but we barely end up seeing her. Like legit 40+ chapters with absolutely no mention of her and the author even introduces another female character during that time and it seems the author likes her more because she gets way more screen time. I know this is supposed to be a harem but you can’t just forget one of the main female characters for that long, that’s bad writing and pacing. Then there’s the stuff with his family. Bro that was done so terribly, the author made it seem like the family really betrayed him. His own sister made his gf at the time break up with him and called him disgusting. So why when he goes to confront his family, he forgives them and basically acts like nothing happened. All that happened was that the sister cried once and the next day everything was ok. That’s not how real emotions work. It takes time to forgive someone and it’s never that easy. I’m not saying that MC should’ve been immature with his reaction, but he should at least act like what they did hurt him which it did, so why was he acting so unaffected and unbothered when he actually saw them? IMO this was bad writing on the authors part. With all that being said it is interesting and not a complete lost cause. The author just needs to step it up a notch.

Good novel. I'm looking forward to more chapters

I'll keep reading and give five stars if you keep update the chapters in better scheduled way.

So far so good. An electrifying blend of suspense, action, and intrigue. You won't want to put this one down as the plot unravels with unexpected surprises.

I wish you'd tell anybody who'd be interested."