Bound By Power

Bias not included; this is obviously the greatest work of our era. Simply an incredible piece of art.Jokes aside, any suggestions, criticisms, plot deficiencies, or the like would be greatly appreciated.

I don't know why this novel is getting good reviews when I was just having fun with writing, but I'm glad that everyone's taking it well. Because of that! I'll be posting an extra chapter every time we reach a 100 power stones milestone! Also, send those summoning pens my way and I'll use them to the fullest ^-^ Thank you all so much for all your support and I hope you continue to want to read this novel while I continue to enjoy writing it. :) Sincerely,DaisukiDayoSenpai

touched Bard.

"Really? You've fought alongside them before?"

"Sir, is everything alright, you have been in the Corporeal room for an entire day?"  

Dawn.

I actually read this when it was on kindle imagine my surprise when I see it here.It’s always nice to see a ntr story so 5 stars for that and I genuinely like the writing and characters hope to see more and don’t listen to the hate, people can like what they want (unless it’s illegal) so take my stones cause I forget to use them

The authors premise is solid enough. Character and plot development need work. The writing as a whole is stilted and needs polishing. The writing style seems to point to the authors lack of maturity. I'm sure he or she will be able to weave more coherent tales as they grow as an author. This is not a bad effort though and the novel as a whole is readable unlike others I have read. This author is right on the precipice of being a good writer. It won't hurt to give this story a read. Just know that it is lacking. Especially in character interactions with other characters and the way situations are fleshed out. An example is how the world reacts to the characters return from the seven year dungeon. Another is the interaction between the character and the guild his father helped found.