Alinal: the fall of vola

author is really goated to come up with such a good novel and really loved this novel

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work, though there is still room for improvement

This is one of the best upcoming stories I've read in a while 👏👏

"Okay, what if we name it ...."

"First, for you to understand this better, me and Trunks came from about twenty years in the future. Secondly, in three years, a pair of androids are going to appear nine miles off of South City. Their goal was to kill dad, but he had already died a few months before due to a heart virus that had no cure at the time..." Future Gonan continued.

"Because, to that little kid, you mean the world itself, Grayfia. You are his mother, basically the only real family he has left and he would rather hurt himself than to see you get hurt with his actions and words. In this regard… Millicas reminds me of myself when I was little and still had Mom around." Alex said with a tingle of sadness in his voice, as he moved past Grayfia and toward his little cousin, stepping into the balcony and finding Millicas gazing at the valley underneath his feet, with mountainous ranges surrounding them.

The sight of this much blood and gore made the stomachs of the soldiers ache. The beast growled in aggresiveness and it then lunged at the other retreating soldiers, and this time everyone was running in panic.

[Joe] [19 January xx43] [M.C.]