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The story line is good, The story having a good potential to have awsome plot… i really enjoyed reading this story and i am eagerly waiting for next chapter

need extras for mazes & floating orb, those layers

Tina and Jim I love them..they are so cute and their love quarrel. I like Jim being naughty around Tina and always piss her off with his flirting but he is surely and truly in love with her

Amazing novel, strong MCs personality, unique power system, mystery and sci-fi. What else is needed? Just for the author to continue this amazing work 😀

please update more ✨I really like thd story

Sorry for the inconveniences we (male) cause

Wonderful. The story has a somewhat slow pacing, but its packed full of content and i never feel like the story is lacking anything. Read it yourself and be blown away by the amazing writing and story that this author produces.

Update as of chapter 29; The Vote- The Author is cooking on this one, although it is quite slow tbh, but you can feel it that the author is really taking his time building his characters, especially the Mc. So here is my opinion:Writing quality: 4.5/5  Although it might be a slightly more difficult to read, but I personally feel like it really suits the story, the writing in question is a bit poetic, maybe even too much in some instances, but in the second arc it starts to simplify, I feel like it was intentional.. to set the tone of the arc. My opinion, yours might differUpdating stability: 5/5 I mean what is there to say, one chap a day, sometimes 2-3. As is it the Authors hobby at this point in time it is good. Keep it up.Story development: 4/5I feel like the author is playing around too much. The pacing could be better, but it was enjoyable nonetheless. I mean as of right now it seems to be around 20-30 chaps with 1.5k - 2k word count for an average arc, so decide for yourself.If you are searching for a brain rot novel that you turn your brain down and read, this might not be for you. This is a journey of not only action, but emotions, bonds and so much more.Characters: 4.5/5 Maybe I’m biased, but I feel like the characters are good, The Mc especially in the latest chapters. He’s smart, but is still lacking. Not like the perfect Mc’s you sometimes encounter. While he is cold and doesn’t hesitate to slice at a dude, we still haven’t seen him in action properly, but that is why I’m exited for this arc. The side cast is good, although it could be a little more fleshed out. My personal favourite would be either Talia or Handy. Well we’ll see where the author takes this.Also what I have to mention. I really like the dialog of this work. Sometimes it might be too much, but it really reflects the dark world they live in, don’t worry its not edgy or "deep" 😂World Building - 3/5 - for nowWell although we still haven’t seen much of it, because we are still stuck in the slum. I believe the next arc might delve into that a little bit more. There was a hint of a Major conflict with the Beast, for now it seems a little bit generic conflict... But I’ll let the author cook. Maybe it’ll be a giant surprise waiting for us.Power system: 4/5 The power system is a generic mana/spells/elements but the Author could be hiding something in his sleeve.I mean there’s nothing wrong with it, I like such stories, but there is also nothing much to see. But again, we’re still in the beginning and haven’t seen much, so there could be way more waiting for us. Also there are Gods apparently, that actually exist and can grant power? if I understood it correctly. I give 5 stars because the book really deserves some exposure.Great work author, keep up the good work :)

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Hi author Anna i love❤️❤️❤️ reading all your  novels and I'm very happy to read dis one too🤗🤗🤗 keep on updating plsssss and write other book like dragons elves

Amazing, electrifying story from start to finish! The pacing is well crafted and the writing style and the quality is insane! The author description is so vivid! Feel like the whole cinema when reading there. 100% recommend for this peak!