I am Prince's pampered wife

okay, im just going to give a good review because ill give u the benefit of the doubt for the future but objectively this is a 2/5. the pacing is all over the place, the descriptions are jarring. its just very poorly written. i really think you should study the basic conventions of good storytelling if u genuinely have a desire to progress ur writing skills. theres just weird info dumps+ lack of info if that makes sense and things are just well written. please study some more man before jumping into writing. although u might think its great from a reader pov theres just so much that doesnt make sense. def an improvement from ur previous works tho

to be honest , l just read few chapters, and it's quite alright , the character design is ok only repeated words but the rest is fine .

The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started  showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...

I did love the concept of the story and it's progression. Each chapter holds enough light about the character and involves the reader as a second perspective . Great work ✍️

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