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Yippys
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- July 1,2024
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I haven't read school or student base novel in so long, the first chapter overwhelmed me by the long chapter haha, my fault. anyways I liked it the plot is solid alright! lets read more!
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Author I would just like to apologize for not releasing any new chapter due to circumstances and that new chapter will being releasing soon.
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I really love it I can't wait for more chapters
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The story is very good. I liked the concept of neyris and blessings . The story has a lot of offer waiting for new chapters . I hope the next chapters qre as fun to read as the first 3 chapters.
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An engaging novel with rich characters and a gripping plot. The pacing keeps you hooked, though some parts drag. A must-read for fans of the genre!
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This novel has all the drama, passion, and tension a romance needs! Ava and Adrian’s dynamic keeps you hooked, making it a great read for fans of possessive CEO stories. Highly recommended!
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The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...
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wow so cool and sigma, I can't beleaf it. I went home frum skool and red tis it so amazing and eggciting wow bazinga💪😎‼️
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The book has a really good start!The vibes of this book are quite similar to shadow slave, as the author seemed to take inspiration from it.The characters are extremely well-written and believable, though I wish the main character had a bit more screen time. He's constantly put into situations where he's far too weak to truly shine, but even then he somehow still manages to at least pull his own weight.
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really nice story just haven't got the hang of how to Open free chapters
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I haven't really read much of the story but the rate at which it's growing would any newbie author's eye, just like it did with me. However may I ask why the author hasn't been uploading?
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It's a nice story but you should ensure you update it weekly at least one or two chapters a week it increases on chances of getting a contract
"The Lost Heart of Ice Across the Realms".