Dragon King with Seven Stars

it's needs some major editing. seems like it was written by a highschooler..... decent story line, but really tough to follow.

Absolutely love this book. I so so love Henry and Aurora's relationship. Can't wait for more updates

Bro, I got reprimanded by admin when I gave the sauce. Google can help you. It is relatively easy to find. :)

Didnt even make it past ch 3 on armipotent due to grammer from translation unless its changed

I've caught up to the end of the story. Heres my rating followed by why it ISN'T a 10/10.Rating - 6/10.Now for the "Why?"  SPOILERS  !!TL/DR non spoiler at the bottom!! 1. THE ROMANCE Bare with me on this - I'm not looking for a porno harem or some nonsense - read this for real.The main character (MC) is a young adult in his late teens, who clearly has a harem, as descripted in the title of the light novels themselves. As with many harem type animes, mangas, manhwa, light novel, etc, the MC 'typically' doesn't get laid by anyone in their harem. This is not the issue here, it is as expected from such types of novels and so on.The issue is that the MC  does  get laid, and although not in much detail, the satisfaction of it finally occuring is almost non-existant. It took (if I remember correctly) 8 entire novels to get to that point. This is after the fact that he accepts his 'awakening' personality as his own, thus understanding that he is, in fact, a pervert that wants to bang all of his cute monsters   Marchosias. 8 novels, and he only just barely  gets with Marcho.Worse still, she is his WIFE for over 3 months before this even happens. Not only that, but in all 10 novels combined, he's had sex with her only 3 times.Please understand I'm not looking for a porno in novel form, but Marcho is reborn by him as his monster and acknowledged as his wife... With a ticking time bomb attached to her stats.   The less MC and Marcho are connected and in love and care for eachother, the more likely bad shit is to happen to both of them. Our MC is clearly a smart guy and understands the risks of fucking with the 'Creators' gifts, but he completely, inexplicably ignores this caviat to her rebirth.And to make things even worse, his "monsters of the covenant" are all romantically interested in him, and have on multiple occasions asked for him to give them babies - which his 'wife' Marcho is okay with him having relations outside of her, btw - and he refuses them every single time and instead gives them candy or some shit. All for a guy who suposedly "accepted his dark side" that was clearly stated to want more than just 'daughters'.That is why this relationship lowers the ranking by a minimum of 2 points.2. THE SECRETS Throughout the whole story, the same thing happens over and over again to us readers - the author keeps secrets from us. In many stories this is executed well and has no negative effects on the story itself (usually because the MC doesn't know the secret either), but in this story that is not the case.Time and time again, the MC is given clear, deciding information that could lead to his victory or defeat - tide changing information, rewards, items, plans... all of which the reader is left in the dark about until the very last second when it's actually put into action.For example: the mc is given 3 rewards from the 'creator', and all 3 rewards remain a secret until he uses them. First was the 2 Rebirths that we had no idea about until Duke/Wight was dying. The Second is "Rank Up," which we didnt know about  until he met the 'creator' again and recieved his third reward . The third, we STILL  don't know about. We don't even know what the third reward is  called , much less what it  does !Another example would be most recently in the tenth novel, a repeat of one of his plans (that we also didn't know about) performed in the Axel Kingdom. He cloned himself with Stolas, went to meat Belial, and straight up got stabbed in the back lethally... all while the reader is thinking "what the fuck?" But of course, at the last second, it was a body double made by Stolas and was revealed to be so to us readers, so that he could trap the big bad "Black".All I have to say to this is this:Seriously? We are reading from the point of view and mindset of the MC. We should know what he hears, sees, thinks, plans, and desires. We are him. That is how the story is written. So why are we, the readers, kept in the dark about everything, and I truly mean everything, that is even a little important?For the repetetiveness of such a horrible reading experience, I'm taking another 2 points off the rating.IN CONCLUSION (TL/DR) Though the story is fantastic in and of itself, there are major flaws to the character due to the writers unwillingness or inability to fully bring him to life, and there are story writing techniques that are blatantly overused and out of place. Final score is 6/10.