Whispers In The Moonlight

Ive been hanging on for a long time.

It is now the next day I was interrupted yesterday while creating the last entry now let me continue it.

Then with the Emperor's death being recent, the kingdom was forced to accept a young prince as the next emperor. It could also be imagined how other nations would see this fiasco.

Alex looked at Ban trying his best to escape from his grip. He was gonna add something else until he felt a hand poking his shoulder.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

I said yep what a concept

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

"That's right, and I will drag this creature out of your body."

I have given this book a try, I honest have. I read all the way up to chapter one hundred and eight, and could not take the torture anymore. The story line, had everything it needed to be great, and that’s why I kept reading; hoping it would get better. Yet, I was met with a bunch of inner thoughts, and long explanations, over every single thing. I understanding the need to explain, but should it take two to four chapters, just to get a single thought out ? Randy, spent more time pondering, and thinking of every single thing that it becomes dumb and dry super fast. Not to mention that he has to be one of the dummest, if not most naive, Mc’s out there. Once again, I really think the book has what it needs to be great. Only, if you focus more on depth and not unnecessary filter to fill the pages. Example, Hey randy, you’re eating breakfast ? Hey randy, I didn’t expect to see you today? Hey randy, you can now assimilate this crystal core? two to four pages later of randy thinking of how to respond, rambling in his inner thoughts, or trying to make any decision”.

Great! I like the story and the characters! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Author here! This is a comedy set in the apocalypse, so expect some dark humor, some visceral action, and plenty of laughs. What are you in for?A legendary hero reborn and his crab saving the world.BDSM-loving villainsBeheadingsCrabs soliciting prostitutesProstitutes soliciting crabsHeartfelt emotional storytellingExplosionsHelp me out and leave a review or comment! And let's enjoy some delicious crab together.

In general I like the story quite a lot and I feel that there could be a lot of potential. But one thing the author needs to work on keeping uniformity to his writing. it's really confusing and irritating when there is no consistency to when the characters are speaking and thinking, sometimes they speak under "" sometimes it's BOLD and in the recent chapters it seems they are speaking after - If there was some uniformity in that like "" for dialogue and '' for monologue and thoughts it would be way easier to read. Hopefully the author would change it in the upcoming chapters so that I can come back and edit my review.