Whispers In The Moonlight

I have follow the journey through  MMORPG rebirth of the strongest grandmaster with this being the sequel I am very excited to see what is to come. Those that are new it would not hurt to read  MMORPG rebirth of the strongest grandmaster but do know that our author is the best at keeping to his word on bonus chapters. I look forward to the exciting new adventure that lays ahead for Max

the story has so much verbiage, races that are only described once, characters whose development you'll prolly never see again.... IT'S A MESS. It's like somebody built up 10 years' worth of ideas and never had, an second person streamline it.

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other than the update stability and few minor grammatical errors, everything is fine. give it a try

This isn't worth your time. Double returns apparently mean 10x, 100x or anything else really.  What will happen when he provides power to a disciple changes constantly over the course of a few chapters.  Could be translation rather than the author but everything else feels similar.  At the end of one chapter, the sect master is respecting the MCs decision and at the start of the next chapter, he is angry about it.

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One of favorite novels on this site(I originally found it on scribblehub) I been loving it so far. I really like all the characters especially the Mc Keith and the interactions between each other, the only thing that I would like to see change is the pace to speed up a little bit but it's still early in the novel so hopefully it will. #Vanessa's-best-girl

Writing quality is mixed. Most of the storie is well written, but I can barely read the combat scenes.Updates are near consistently dayly exept this month with 2 updates in 26 days.The storie develops fine though sometimes it is a litle clunky. The Caracter design seems to be above average, though the MC seems not that deep as of chapter 35. (Simple minded "I want to be strong to search my dead and because I embaress my family...") but there seems to be room for growth.The world seems like the classical Invaded by foreign beings through portals, but there are hints on some depth beyond that in the human sosciety.