Stating my review as of C51, I held the top Non-Author review on the original so please read the whole review.I would check on it daily till it finally was removed by the author himself. It was a great book that I rated 4.5 Stars for having great Writing Quality, Stable updates, Good Character Design, the only issue was the lacking story development which was due to low chapter count, and lower world background due to the main character as of then not expanding his horizons past 3 places, all described and imaginable through context, just a lack of world knowledge. This story has, in my opinion, different from the original too much for it to be considered a replacement.The Writing Quality is lower, at 3.5 stars, but I rounded to 4 due to the rating system in place. The author can't seem to stay on topic and butts in the story to explain things that need no explanation, and could if was a good author, be explained in dialogue or thought. For example, the heart cultivation system, they deviate for a minute to explain the heart cultivation system, how it's based on the soul and therefore one of the hardest things in the cultivation world to raise, and how only the 3 top immortal emperors have reached its peak.He can think back on his death while cultivating in his store," I could have caught up to him and beat him if I had raised my heart cultivation to Heart Void... I'm still stuck at Heart unmoving mountain, I may have had a glimpse into it previously but my cultivation now is simply too low
Fantastic novel, good translation quality and regular updates. Original translation at wuxiaworld please support translators there. This is applicable for battle through the heavens, heavenly jewel change, unrivalled tang sect, coiling dragon, desolate era, i shall seal the heavens, renegade immortal, skyfire avenue, warlock of the magus world,perfect world, wu dong qian kun, a record of a mortal's journey to immortality, legend of the dragon king, terror infinity, sovereign of the three realms, tales of demons and gods, the great ruler, child of light and a will eternal
I like the premise so far, and it’s obvious that the author has thought a lot about the world and characters and has planned it out really well. My only critique is that there are a lot of sentences without periods and mission capitalization. It’s still a pretty good story though :)
I really enjoyed the story so far but as the story progresses it is becoming less lighthearted and feels as turning to a more tragic plot line, rather then a comical lighthearted adventure as the synopsis lead to believe. I definitely feel it still will be an interesting read for those who like the more serious setting of endless setbacks that the MC suffers and how he solves them.Anyways thanks to the author for an enjoyable first 100 chapters.
Lol I just kept refreshing the page and watched the chapters disappear more and more. But anyways it was fun while it lasted wished you didn't just randomly drop it when I thought it was a good story but oh well good luck in your future endeavors.
Absolutely amazing novel. The characters are more fleshed out than many other novels on this site, and the grammer and readability are phenomenal. I wouldn't say this is the best novel ever, but its a great read, and although there are some cliche's, they are handled pretty well that you don't feel upset when they appear.I absolutely loved the story so far (ch 32), and look forward to reading more chapters in the future.The MC, while not the smartest cookie, uses his past knowledge semi-wisely and works for his success. He also realizes the mistakes he made in the past and has pretty good character development.I would definitly reccomend this to anyone interested in the following genre's:Action, Virtual Reality, Romance, Harem, Reincarnation/Do-Over, Fantasy, Martial Arts, Etc... (story just started, so can't say much)
You have to be patient while reading this novel.It starts really slow.It does not start in a direction you expect (the title is fitting, but a bit deceiving).The story gets a lot more interesting and speeds up after a while, so give it some time and goodwill.It is worth it.
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