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Suny869EyK rated it Because you loved me!
May 14,2025
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Autor here, its my first novel, its not perfect, I was bored so i wanted to give it a try and here we are.Few basic questions: - "On what you got inspired to write the novel?" I'll tell you, im a pasionate gamer and I love fantasy, I mostly play mmos, RPG and Souls-like so thats were mostly come from.- "What is this book about?" It's about a guy named Fenix who lives in a future earth where some people are forced to awake powers and fight monsters and vyle creatures, might as well humans and if they survive, they receive special powers.- "What type of guy is the MC?" He is a good guy, who wants to explore the world and survive.- "Will the MC be overpowered?" I dont think overpowered, he will be strong yeah, but at some cost- "Will there be romance?" Yes and no harem.- "How often are you updating?" Currently I dont know, i would like to give you guys a daily chapter atleast.Also english is my forth language so bare with me, I will try my very
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Suny869EyK rated it Atlas I: Lost Memories
May 14,2025
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The characters are great and the plots are also captivating  Kee it up 💪
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This is a fun read so far. I'll get back to it when I have the coins to spare. The MC make decent choices and the family seems like an excellent group, no rivalry the gets boring. Character growth is don't well and the mystery is engaging.
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Suny869EyK rated it The Forgotten Reflection
May 13,2025
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Actual masterpiece ?? Seriously this book is veryyyy good and i would highly recommand it as i was highly and very well surprised by it ! Gibe it a try !
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Suny869EyK rated it Lying Two Faced
May 13,2025
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Hola 👋, solo te quería decir que soy tu nueva fan, me encantan tus historias, ❤️ y espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo ❤️, esfuérzate mucho, te quiero chao.(^^)
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The story revolves around Professor Hank, who's searching for his missing loved one, Vanya. He's shocked to discover that Vanya's soul may be tied to a virgin named Jane, which contradicts the rules of Vanya's kind. Professor Hank is torn between his loyalty to Vanya and his growing feelings for Jane, who's now in danger. The narrative is rich in emotional tension, with a complex mythology and moral dilemmas.Enjoying it so far.
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Suny869EyK rated it path to fate
May 13,2025
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This is a very unexpected but very good novel recommend
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Here is my review about Maiden Houdini:Worldbuilding: The worldbuilding is quite blend between magic and modern world which is I think it's quite alright. However, I do like the antagonistic group treated Maiden Houdini as the threat here which is quite nice direction. My suggestion is to flesh out the world more to make it more interesting.Characters: For me the characters here are enjoyayable especially with the main Character, Maiden Houdini. I liked Madame Houdini as a character as she has a quite charisma and quite a good escape artist too with using her tricks and wits. For other characters, I think they are okay for now, just needed to flesh out them more. Writing: I like the writing of this world with a detailed description about the world and the character attire. I also the action scene in this book which is quick, but still quite okay to be follow.Overall, this is a nice book to read and I would recommend it
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Suny869EyK rated it The Legendary Mark
May 13,2025
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Overall: Great book keep going, the story was interesting to make push through despite the cons, unfortunately it seems to have gone on hiatusOkay, here the cons and some tips (more for improvement rather than anything else):- Use past tense, instead of present.- too much description, that sound robotic- this relates to the last point, but: too much philosophical description, adding some here and there is good, but not every action needs to be described like that (use it rarely and wisely) Exmp: "He held the pill..." not"he held the pill in his hand it's weight signifying his only lifeline in this harsh reality, as it acted as a strong reminder of the cruelty of the world.."This is more of a tip, but I think you should get a better cover (I am happy to help if you don't know how)Anyway, good luck and hopefully you come back soon.
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So exciting to this to start, I know the story will be fire
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Story is actually so good and so funny. But I just don't understand why Luca's so clueless when he grow up in orphanage.Luca is such a sweet heart. 😍😍 And such a money-grubber and effin workaholic, dude please get some rest you're making me so tired. Sometimes I want to enter your dungeon and knock you out.Xavier, OMO he is such a husband material huhuhuhu. He is so patient and understanding (based on how ambiguous Luca's word are) 😭😭😭 I also feel you whenever you got blue balls even tho I don't have balls.Ollie is so supportive friend. And do everything on Luca's whims and wants. hahahaha, and boy really think he can get a wife. 🤣🤣Kyle he's the only one with braincells in the group but always on such situations because he use it too much 🤣🤣And Jax omg such a cutie. Must protect (and his children)And please more on D29 and Sid banters.
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Suny869EyK rated it Legion: Cursed Dominance
May 13,2025
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The book is really different from the normal fantasy type novels but that's what made it very interesting, nice job author 🫡🫡👍
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