Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.Okay something would like to tell.1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic
First of, I miss WW but I am happy about it being here. That sayd let's get to review!Translation Quality:5/5- Its perfect what do you expect?Update Stability:5/5- Since the start there where no unforseen hiatus or breaks. 5/5 really stableStory Development: 1/5- The Start is really good but more often that not the story get's streched without the need with unimportand chapters as well as boring informations.Char Development:4/5-Solid, good, niceWorld background:5/5Nothing to complain overall: 4.00Give this story a chance it is worth it. Don't worry even though it has a lot of boring and usless chapters it is absolutly worth it!
cool story... it;s a long time since i relaxed into a story like this. It's not about the characters or worldbuilding. It's just about the story and a great story at that. The author is an amazing story teller, i got so immersed on those long chapters i lost track of time.
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This is an very nove story but development of the Mc is left to be desired but I still like it it very in character of the Mc as he is shown to be kind
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