nice and well done live long life and give us more  story like this

It is pretty good but writing quality could have been better. Unique story. It is experimental for first work but it works. Hope it never goes down.

Ava is so innocent. I'm still wondering why their bestfriend bond broken.What if Liam also had crush on Ava, but thinking that Ava treated him as a friend and he developed feelings, Ava would feel disgusted, So, he hid his feelings and got a girlfriend hiding from her?Anyways, the plot and character design are good showing Ava's incredible journey.Let's see how this journey goes. Keep it Up! Author.

A very nice one. I highly recommend reading it

Best ever novel read ❤️, eager to read the upcoming chapters I am in love with Mri 😭😭😭,he is so cool,his aura 😭❤️

it starts off really great, a few plot holes but not big or bad, but tha. later on they start happe ing more and more, like how he is supposedly as powerful as a high level knight  ut he has to poison people to win a fight eve. though he is also highly trained in a lost sword art but can't take on two low level guards because it's not worth his tike to rescue some slaves even though tactically speaking it would be better to have multiple people running in different directions to give a false trail.... just kinda lost me. Story feels forced.

Nothing hurts more than betrayal, I can't wait for the revenge because zero deserves so much better! ☺️good work author.

Interesting and brings a fresh, innovative concept. The idea of the author being transported into their own novel and becoming the villain instead of the hero is unique and exciting, Lucifer!!! appears to be complex and well-developed. His internal struggle between wanting to be a hero and his reality as a villain adds depth to his character and makes the reader empathize with him.It’s clear that the story moves at a very fast pace, especially in chapters 1-3. But overall, this novel is truly enjoyable!

One of the most rational “system novels” I have ever read. I hope the other episodes will be as good as the 22 episodes released so far. I hope the frequency of episodes will increase and the story will be as good.

The writing style is amazing, love the story ♥️Still reading, decided to drop a review, the book and the plots got me hooked

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I'm loving this story so far it's so beautiful and detailedI can't wait to see more character development on Amanda and i hope her and Elias end up together