So far its amaizing. Just read 11 chapters and got me hooked up already. In the beginning Im confused about the countries whose enemy whose, maybe you can make a glosary or something. Im also curious how can a metalurgist good at medic and war strategic. Anyway just keep the momentun author, its promising already.
So incredibly repetitive. All the girls are in love with the protag, all in the same way. Maybe it's just because it's too early, and you can very well say that, but I don't care.I would honestly prefer if it was something like a tragedy/psychological novel, where protag is alone in the world with no one on his side. It would be edgy and emo(probably), but I would still prefer that over this. Too bad such a novel doesn't seem to exist.So if you're looking for a casual, borderline brainless read, then this is for you.The grammers nice though. I haven't noticed any odd sentences at all. That's all you really need to know. The rest of this review was written by me for my own amusement. Read it if you want, but it's not good/helpful or polished.Short summary, basically protag had to act as a villain in a novel cuz a system wanted him to. However after dying he has to do it again for some reason. Here's the catch though, basically every single character thats female with a name fell in love with protag and got reincarnated.That's not even a joke. Every single female with a name. And the reasons they fell in love with protag aren't even that good either. Things how they've been watching him for years and fell in love. Don't get me wrong, if it's once or twice then it can absolutely be creative. When it's like 10 or whatever amount of heroines this stories going to have though, it just comes across as lazy.Who am I kidding. It's probably going to be like 1000 different heroines.Anyway, so they love protag. Not like a light crush or anything, but basically a yandere type thing. I'm not against yanderes at all, in some cases they're actually pretty nice, but it's kind of ridiculous here. Not sure why but they just irk me. Maybe it's because they're all the same in terms of how they love him. They hate the original mc of the novel(in fact they all conspired to kill him in their past life. One lady even sacrificed millions of lives to do it or something. That's just douchy. Like seriously. I'm going to go off on tangent so skip if you don't care. It reminds me of this other novel where the protag is a spy or something but he gets betrayed. He has a final card up his sleeve though, and that's to literally blow up bombs he's set everywhere. It doesn't even make sense. Like nuke level. Like demolish the entire world, killing billions in seconds. Why? To get back at like three people. It's so annoying. It's so lazy. The protag doesn't even feel regret as he floats in a sea of souls, murdered by him. Leaving aside how unrealistic it is, it's just so douchy. God that made me so mad. Honestly I've got a incredibly filthy mouth in terms of swearing, or at least used to(league of legends level), but I can't even use it. God.), and blindly love the protag.It's very noticable as well, at least to the protag. But just one word from the system and he lets it go.I don't feel like doing this review anymore, so peace.
Ok, I really like the start and I hate it from the moment it enters the Arena City.The story between Eve and him was perfect, but like any other novel (unfortunately) something serious must have happened to her (too cliché).After that, several point that disappoint me.- At the beginning a discussion with Eve that Stella was his and that it didn't bother Eve that he has other girls, but that totally changes some chapter later- He goes back to see Pengu later, but in no case goes to see Stella? or the first "toy" and future sect leader? one of the moments that started making me stop reading the novel- The death of Lucia (or Lucie?) (The Inn girl) and yeah a toy too.- Abandon Helia, for whom he was starting to have feelings.- What happenned to Katia and Elea?- Ok, there’s the problem with his soul, but frankly it becomes nonsense extract Eve's soul by ejaculating in a powerful woman, lol?- No more 18+ scenes for a while, ok, he only likes and wants Eve, but change the name of the Novel then!- "Smut Romance with THEIR Girlfriends, but after 500 chapters he still have one.
I thought this would be good. A solid premise, finally using something other than a mage type. And then there I was fifteen chapters in and just my hope is nosediving. The first 15 chapters were so bland, repeating the same thing over and over from different povs, taking something that could have been 3 chapters long and drawing it out, like a long dumpster fire and now I’m not even interested. Would only recommend if you really enjoy face slapping over plot and good writing.
Writing quality: I'd say it's pretty good, though it may be a bit unrefined and messy. The grammar is fine, with some occasional mistakes that get corrected almost immediately once pointed out. Stability of updating: More often than not, the author updates 2 chapters a day. Sometimes, there's only one chapter, and rarely, there's no chapter at all. When that happens, the author tries to compensate in the future. Emphasis on "tries".Story development: The story is kind of rushed but it's developing quite nicely. Uses clichés but I'd like to think the author uses it in a way that makes fun of or builds upon it, rather than just copying and pasting the cliché. Cons are that romance is kind of unrealistic, an indication that the author is inexperienced in that field. Character design: I like the characters. There are some that are black-and-white but there are hints that they'll get fleshed out in the future. Also WARNING this is a harem, but the girls exhibit different personality traits and are unique from each other. World background: This is the part where it's really just straight ripped off of other stories. Well, I can't say for certain since it's only in Chapter 39 and the world might get more interesting in the future, but so far it's bland and boring. Thanks for listening to my TEDTalk.
This is the best cultivation novel I have read so far, the Mc is smart and the background characters are not stupid like the other novels like i know. The chapters release are fast and I would recommend others to try reading
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Now I've read up to chapter 61. The novel is good, writing is extremely easy to just flow through the lost chapters in the story. But it started to get a little repetitive, or maybe I'm the only one who's tired after reading 61 chapters in a row. but overall it's a good read.
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