The wanna be white lord

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

As I said that, Hoseok choked on his sprite, coughing loudly, while I looked at him confused, debating whether his making fun of me or being serious.

I love the description of the story,let's read!

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seems slow but so far i like it is it the kind of slow paced world building novel.

It is always wonderful to meet new writers with great skill. I liked the accurate description of the place, which made you imagine it well. Keep it up, man

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐Now that I just wrote a review for a book I didn't like, it is time to write one for a book I like.No / minor spoilers ahead.Stability of Updates: With two chapters a day, the update schedule is quite good. Although, I wouldn't mind 20 chapters a day, considering I devoured all 20 chapters in just two hours!Story Development: The story is progressing well and stands out as one of the better novels in its genre.Character Design: This is where the novel truly shines. The MC is well-developed, and the side characters are given sufficient attention. The MC thinks things through before acting, which is a relief as I hate stupid MCs.World Background: Everything is explained just right, not too much not too little.I could write some more about how MC does this and that. But that would take away from you just reading it for yourself.

I love the story so far. I love the concept of it and how it dives into a system, yet it gives me the feel of not everything being OP> The vibes remind of the book, Blood Warlock Succubus (whatever the title was) in terms of concept, and I really loved that book. The writing quality is also really good, and it's an easy and smooth read. Definitely something I recommend to people who like the post apocalyptic style of writing. Great work!