The Vampire: The Life of Amon Part1

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Author keeps giving the MC abilities that he clearly does not have, it's super stupid and annoying. MC is very stupid, and keeps making weird decisions. Plot is kinda forced, and MC is not allowed to change the timeline, or someone will smite him or something idiotic like that.It's very clear to see from here that the author actually has no understanding of Marvel, or Slime.

After reading till chapter 100 I couldn't help but shake my head in disappointment, as I reqd more and more I couldn't help but notice so many plot holes and contradiction in the plot.Many times I've read a chapter and thought to myself "but that doesn't add up to 10 chapters ago..."Also the cultivation system and the martial arts were too messy and weren't explained properly, if the plot was good I might have been able to swallow this shortcoming but since both the plot and the cultivation system were bad I just dropped it at chapter 100.

I think the raw is this 神宠与我有缘 but I’m not too sure.                                                                                       

I like this novel so far, it’s really good!!!!!!!! I hate that we need to write 140 o4 something characters ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I really would like for the mysterious black magician to get completed, it started off slow but got a little bit better  I believe if the author continues to develop the story it will start to improve their skills . I just hope this isn't another story that gets abandoned and stays incomplete .

Dropping at chapter 70Poor grammarBadly written characters (male lead is an annoying ungrateful 4ss while female is just a mindless maiden in love)Story is ok but can make you roll your eyesAll in all, decent for an '******* writter', good luck!

this story is good but i can't get behind the fact that this logo belongs to "villain to kill" on line Webtoon sorry if this seems annoying but never the less jeep up the work.