The two Omegas {BL}

Love it Love it Love it!I wanna read more about Lyle and what he does next!Keep it up author-san!I kinda suck at writing reviews, so this will have to do :P            

This novel is far from perfect. Its main selling point is a fairly well done overpowered female protagonist. On the other hand, its main weaknesses are a terrible sense of blind Chinese nationalism, the weirdly stupid mind games that all the characters face, as well as the complete lack of research the author has done on any of the subjects presented in the novel.I first began reading this novel both because of the amazing review score it had, as well as for a cross-dressing protagonist. The story starts off quite well, with a female lead who dies in her own world but is pulled into reincarnating into a future world because of a "grandpa teacher"-like spiritual entity inside her mind. It continues on to quite hilarious descriptions of her mother and the other characters around her as she slowly progresses through life pretending to be a boy in order to be able to inherit her father's inheritance and legacy.The characters in the novel, up to the point I've read, are quite interesting. They're all varied in personality and working through their own motivations as they interact with our heroine Ling Lan. We have an overbearing mother character, a kind grandpa figure who's also a hidden ninja, a stupid yet competent AI assistant, as well as a wide range of friends that collect around her. Yet the most interesting character is still the MC Ling Lan, who despite being an incredibly talented girl pretending to be a boy, only has the single objective of having a normal life and ultimately giving birth to the most talented child possible.Another aspect of this author that I really like is her skill in describing battles. The author has a natural talent for describing and directing melee fights between individuals. While there isn't much focus on any actual martial arts or actual techniques, the author still does a good job with understanding the capabilities and physical limits of the human body and expressing the fights as a natural and fluid manner. However, at the same time, the author is quite terrible at understanding the limitations of non-human entities.This brings me to one of the main areas where the author has been negligent - her research into science fiction. This is undoubtedly a science-fiction work, but this novel does nothing more than throw around the jargon without understanding what any of it actually is. Ling Lan's "AI Assistant

Tumi slowly finished the upper legs and after that, he jumped back up to the tree as he felt that two beasts coming towards the meat.

However, despite his best efforts, as heat starts to pool in the bottom of his stomach, two words manage to slip past Jungkook's lips.

Nanny : Should Nanny tell you my secret recipe then ?

"Will she be alright?" Kuroka asked concerned

"I do not feel it." Maria caught my attention, still annoyed that it was she who went out hunting Victor without being able to find him.

"Great guardian of endless blood, we have earned a great merit. We have found one of the top three sacrifices you have asked for."

Time passes.

storyline is awesome overall this story is a great story 👏👏👏👏👏

i really like it and the fact that he does anything to stop relying on the heavens for anything! looking forward to further chaps :D

wow from the synopsis to the actual story....what a blow out it was...keep up the good work and write more interesting original stories author. keep it up