The Taste of Trouble

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Amazing 5/5 star novel. It's beautiful. So amazing is the words written in this novel some might call it divine.Now I know some might disagree. Some might say fuking MILFs isn't all that great.How foolish a thought.If you read this masterpiece and still name it as wrong.I shall name a liar.

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Disclaimer: I didn't get too far into the novel.With that out of the way...This is a good novel with its potential dragged down by bad (2) technical writing, but the other aspects are passable (3), good (4), or can't be judged from how far I got/great (5).Writing Quality: Lots of grammatical errors and constantly changing pronouns. Sometimes the author even randomly calls the main character by a random name. Update Stability: Self-explanatory Story Development: Decently fast paced so it's not a slog. However, that fast pace makes it so that the events of the story aren't that fleshed out and seems rushed if you're used to longer, more descriptive novels.Character Design: The characters feels a bit flat. Their biggest downfall is that they are coldblooded murderers from the start, with no reaction to kills. However, the author is good at making them recognizable even when they haven't been named.World background: The system is good. I haven't gotten far enough to judge anything so 5 stars.Note: It appears that the GL/Yuri is only temporary before turning straight and het again. The author should comment if I'm wrong.

It is a 'fun' and 'unique' story. A 'never seen before' plot.MC is a trash with no cultivation prospect. He has a fallout with his fiance who is a genius cultivator and a respected disciple of a big sect. MC gets a cheat and cultivates to a relatively high realm. He kills his fiance and those that plot against him. He kills a young master and then when the young master's patriarch comes to kill him, MC kills the patriarch and puts the entire clan to death. MC kills as easily as drinking and eating.

Please fix the chapters from 70 onwards. For the mistake to persist for so long.. much of the novel is them repeating words as well, like how the MC is lazy AF, or what each skill does, or even just the constant spam of dmg numbers which are useless.. i'd give it a star for the update stability and thata about it

I actually really like this one and Is probably my favorite of any of the other stories I've read from you. I do hope you eventually continue it.I love the MC and the original succubus. Unlike in " A Fox's system" Or your rewrite of "A Fox's Systems" I feel the banter between the MC and the Succubus to be a lot more natural and funny.The story seems to progress at a rate I am really satisfied with and I like that there does seem to be actual story arcs with some consequences such as the end of Ch. 10. I do like that the story doesn't seem to be afraid of violence and death. It's also kind of fun and amusing watching the innocent MC turn into a ***-fiend against her will.I am also glad that we got the one and all holy YURI! Oh, how I've dreamed of it. I am kind of hoping that the two girls become companions and that follows the MC as she travels. I even like the idea that eventually the MC has them heal and bring her body back to her parents or that something happens such as the Succubus possessing her former body.This is also a type of story I've been wanting to read for years. Overall I am a fan of this and do hope we get more.

Firstly, you have a great mind!!Excellent world description, imagination and character thoughts. The plot is quite interesting and goes much more interesting from chapter to chapter.Keep Going!!!