The Storm Through The Tide

Well, the original novel was on hiatus for a while. There's a link in the synopsis. MTL with a little correction..................................................................

I will be reviewing 3 sections; quality of the text, characters, and the setting only, as those were the ones that did not receive full stars.The quality of the writing is well thought out and written well, and I didn't encounter any grammatical mistakes. It reads well and fluidly.The story so far a bit confusing, and I'm not exactly sure what it will lead up to, so maybe add foreshadowing here, and there in a few chapters -- would be nice.For the final section, the setting needs to be more detailed and explained. The character's emotions and actions are explained pretty well, but the environment and setting description could use more polish. We have a general idea where the characters could be, but it's not explicitly clear to what place a character could be at during some important event, like the battles or the walking down the river, what are the surroundings? It would be a nice touch to add the full surroundings of where the characters are to build the world better.Overall, it is a good read, I like the idea of the taming!

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The story weaves elements of fantasy, history, and adventure. The plot is well paced.I loved the arabic influence reminding me of the old tales!Highly recommended!

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This is the story of how I met the love of my life ❤️

This is my very first time writing in english (I'm Mexican)

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