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Yo I don’t usually do a review this may be the first but I have to tell you that this novel of yours has potential with just the few chapters I read it’s probably something new with all the cultivation and romance novels here
Im genuinely convinced everyone who reviews and comments on these stories are bots. The world development is bad. The author throws at ranks, names and areas without telling us anything about what they mean and if he does the meanings he gives are things you could tell from a educated guess. " its big" "because they're evil and not righteous". I havent gotten far enough to see much character design vecause i stopped at chapter three. But even then it was so bad, it wasnt like they were people or characters, more like the authors inner concersation with himself, and i didnt even mention yet it seems like when the characters do speak its just them talking about how great their sect is. How great their cultivation is, etc. And thats not even the worst part. The grammar is horrendous. The first chapter wasnt bad but was annoying to read. The second chapter was worse but you could still read it. The third chapter however? Just in the first quarter i pointed out around 10+ errors. I gave up at that point bc i would never finish the chapter of i kept going. So im just going to end it here. I wrote this so someone else hopefully doesnt get tricked by the false reviews that say the story is amazing with nothing wrong with it. Knowing webnovel my review might be pushed down so no one sees it or even removed. But to those who do see and read it. If you can stand a horribly written story that seems to be a translation(not sure about it yet) then go for it. If your not, and your like me. You could check it out but i wouldnt reccomend it, unless by the time you read this the author gets a proof reader and someone to fix all the errors that plague the chapters.
Warning: Minor SpoilerQuick Review:1. Very Good Writing (top first percentile in Webnovel), funny comedy, and near-perfect grammar + spelling (only minor mistakes which too are very rare)2. Consistent and constant updates with well sized chapters(1 per day currently)3. Story Development so far interesting and fun to read with twists.4. All main/side characters have an interesting backstory, with their personality shown through actions.5. Interesting dystopian world set up in the futureConclusion: A solid recommendation from my side, recommended for (VR)MMORPG type novel fans, readers who like comedy and anyone searching for a good read!
really liked the idea of the story and the whole background of the world the story is set in and the upadtes are regular author should come continue to update as such and any way thanks for another wonderful story on this platform 👍👍👍😄😄😄
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