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The beginning of the novel is not pleasant, the mc is immature and sentimental. So why did I give it 5 stars? Because the development is amazing, the writing quality improves, and the MC learns to be pragmatic, and let go of emotions, if it is beneficial he would kill the whole world without hesitation
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In starting chapters, some players reach lvl 50in 1.5days (3 days in-game) is looking a bit extreme to imagine what would levels be after 3yr in MC life. will they reach lvl5000 or in 3yrs.I think author never played any RPG genre games although it is fantasy it is better to use low levels for narration of story.like reaching lvl 10 after 3 days in-game.
I liked Luke's character . Reminds us of a bit of all of us during this pandemic time. Helpless , down on luck ...but fighting it out using his wits ..
I don't care about Michael Fang ir his territory. The author didn't manage to make me care about the MC. The story was enjoyable for a while even if it wasn't the greatest but at some point I realized I never was invested in the characters and so I stopped reading after 300 chapters.The author never gives information until it's too late. It's like he didn't have an idea in mind but kept writing and when he made a decision he gave us the information out of the blue.One example is the MC's family. His parents disappeared and we don't know why but we learn hundreds of chapters later the MC knew all along why. It was just never shared with the reader and we thought there was some mystery but no.Another one is the way the author nerfs MC to make him struggle. It was never explained why he was slow in cultivation until the author gave us the information. Information which is widely known and his teachers could have told him but same thing, the information was shared when the author thought about it, it wasn't something secret or anything so why the wait?I feel like the author isn't sure of hiw his story will unfold so he describes nothing.MC made plans with people and he has insightful ideas. We don't know the plan and what MC's ideas are.His territory gets bigger and better but no details about his territory. We don't know how his people live, what's around it and who manage it when MC is away. It should be the maid but she is also busy with fighting monsters. 20000 people in his territory, he is away often and apparently there is no governing body.Too many things are so vague, secondary characters aren't developed and like always, MC has a very short time to save the day. I will remove the novel from my library.
The idea is kinda interesting and good but the author failed tl create real characters since they all feel unrealistic and dumb.I read until chapter 19, i will continue until 40 to see if it changes
Whole Novel seems to Copy Paste...Also why the hell People Spamming 5 π when there are Zero Chapter updated?is this Novel worth your time?ANS: NoSave your Time and Brain Cell
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