Fairly mediocre read. Nothing that's offensively bad, though also nothing special, creative or particularly good. The writing quality is "so-so". For starters, there is plenty of simple spelling mistakes. I personally don't really mind, though still somewhat annoying.What's more annoying, is the occasional grammatical error. Also nothing too bad or too frequent. It's still there though.The thing that annoys me most about the writing quality, is the really simply and at times clumsily written sentences. A lot of simple word usage and simple sentences and the prose at times doesn't really flow too well.Update stability is fine.Story is fairly generic though interesting enough to keep most people reading.Characters in this novel are one of it's other downfalls. They are all fairly two-dimensional. There just isn't much too them. What you see is what you get.There is also plenty of weird logic leaps all over the place, which make the characters feels more like NPCs, than like actual characters.Big 'meh' for me. If this was done well, this novel would have been so much better.The world is okay. Some thing are pretty interesting, while others are straight ripped out of any generic anime.The world is also pretty childishly put together. The reasoning and motivations for the way things are the way they are, only make sense if you don't really think about them.Could overall be a decent read if you haven't read many novels like this and aren't bothered too much by the occasional writing issues and the childish portrayal of the world and characters. If you're looking for real quality and/or creative, look elsewhere.
why is he racist I was just reading out of boredom then he just becomes racist I don't understand why out of nowhere either the person who wrote this racist or some sort of translation error or it could be the wherever this person is is racist but I don't know.
I like the development of the story. The characters are also very well done and i don't see any grammar errors. Anyway, It's very interesting and a good book. I do recommend it and keep up the good work author! This will be bug someday!
To be honest I like this story alot, what I didn't like is the forced deaths when he did the trial of control, Kristie didn't really need to die, his death was unnecessary, if the author really only wanted one to survive he could've let Kristie and Brett die together at the next stage, but other than that awesome story
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