The Fearless Princess (Forgotten Royals)

its an Interesting premise, really cool world, filled with Interesting characters. I would say bottom line read it, but the lack of updates, slow story progression after a certain number of chapters and now months of nothing at all, idk. you should put it in your library and if you see updates at some piont start reading. really want to see we're this thing goes.

Attention to detail I like but there is a reason Main characters need to have an ambition that the reader would like to see. People to like to have an overarching idea of where the story is going when reading and the MC for this story has zero ambition which means the reader has no idea what the main goal of this whole story is. Im around chapter 60 now and the Main character just wants to laze around and do nothing but is at the same time super serious about his work as a Judge which would make a cool side character but as a main character the story feels cheapened cuz of lack of ambition leaving the reader confused on the point of this story. i.e. Naruto has the ambition of being the hokage, luffy the ambition of being the pirate king now imagine naruto doesn't have that goal the story is just super lackluster. This can be mitigated like in bleach with certain enemies being the focal point to defeat so life can go back as normal but there is a reason bleach is always considered worse than naruto and one piece for a reason it is cuz ichigo does not have any sort of ambition and that is important for the reader to be invested in. If the main character wanted to become the greatest judge which was a title given in the universe that would mean I have something to look forward to and learn more about the universe thru world building which is well done in this novel. If the main character realized an ambition this novel would have been a much better read but going thru case by case feels like chore to me with no overarching goal in mind rather than something I enjoyed.

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(MINOR SPOILERS FOR THE FIRST 15 CHAPTERS)This is a novel that i can see blowing up in the future because it has the typical tropes of the top novels especially when it comes to overpowered mcs.This novel is mainly a mindless journey where you can see the mc destroy everybody in his path and outsmart everyone he meets and i honestly like it, i think its fun to read. The novel also has some attempts at comedy which are okay i guess.The grammar is really good expect for a few spelling mistakes here and there which can easily be overlooked.The story isnt top notch mainly because we dont know the mcs limit, we have no clue what his true power is, especially since he has the ultimate plot armor which is the spirit inside of him. I think the main way the author can improve the novel is by letting us see the mcs limit.When it comes to the world development i think this is a factor that is going in the right direction. I like the world that the author has set up so far and i am excited to see how it will grow from now since we are only at chapter 35 at the time of writing this review.When it comes to character development i think this is a very strange factor of the novel. The mc is sometime a cold killer without mercy and sometimes an extremly trusting individual that reveals alot of stuff easily. I think him being cold makes sense to a certain point considering how he was bullied when he was younger, still think its a bit strange tho. But im extremly interested to see how he will react when he finds out about his sect, i think that is when we'll see huge character development.When it comes to characters in general i think that this is a part of the novel that is done very well, each character has their own personality and none of them feel plain although some can reveal a bit too much to complete strangers at times which feels unrealistic and almost like its just a lazy way of giving the mc info without him really earning it.The stability of updating has improved recently, even though the author doesnt upload or is late sometimes mainly because of him being sick here and there which i think is a justified reason for not uploading.All in all i give this novel a 4.2/5 because even tho its a good novel it still cant compare to the top novels of this site like the birth of the demonic sword which has much better character development and story overall, library of heavens path which has much superior comedy and world building and supreme magus which has better character development and a more solid start. But then again all of these novels have had 250+ chapters to develop their story.Im still gonna follow this novel since i do think it has alot of potential and im interested to see how the story will progress.(I will be updating this review in the future if there are any drastic changes in the story or writing quality.)

This story seems like this will be somewhat of a spin on the hint novels that have started to pop up here and there around here on webnovel.

Enzo slowly walked over towards his Core, before taking a seat on the other side of it. Having reached Core Guiding, he could see veins of elemental energy flowing out from twelve different points. It seemed like the entity was absorbing a small amount of it as energy for itself..

"Well you do not know what I feel, it does feels great. I really don't want to destroy that good feelings with unnecessary conversation. She is not someone that enjoy conversation that much… I guess." Lu Yan is completely blind about romantic relationship, even though he was sure to understand Feng Yanlei characters, he is getting doubtful the longer he talks.

'HIKARI!' I look everywhere but I see no sign of her.