If you don't like MC being forcefully enslaved and tortured by the heroine candidate then this novel isn't for you.I rate it 5 because although I hate Celine as much as I hated Mineta, Malty and Rachel, the novel deserves attention.
The idea is promising with the MC having the ability to compute things, but quickly it becomes cliche. Our MC just stares at measurements and the female love interest is really annoying.
has potential. chapters are very repetitive to pad word count which is incredibly irritating but i like the idea behind the story, so i will stick it out to see where it goes.
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The characters are very one dimensional and the story overall reads like a grade school story. It would probably be suitable for young teens to read, but the story line moves so slowly that I’m not sure it could retain their attention. Most of the story reads like a summary of events: Character A did this, Character B did that. At best I can say this is a good framework for a story that needs more scene development and character depth
Good. Too bad it is not completed. Harry does feels to OP. And Hermione have no presence at all TATOh well, at least she does not get bullied unlike Ron. Lol author, do you have anything against Ron? Although considering Harry is Slytherin it is not OOC in my opinion.I am glad Harry get along with Snape though.Overall I enjoyed this.Author, if you still alive, will you come back and finish this? :puppy eyes: Please?
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