The Empire of Shattered Sky

It's entertaining, but I have several problems with the main characters and dialogue.The main characters don't question anything. They suddenly transmigrated to another world and didn't question anything. They just said, "Oh, let's Dr. Stone this [thing]," and that's it. There are no hypotheses, internal monologues, questioning, or anything like that. Also, I feel like the characters don't try to change the world; they only try to make money, especially given how they act towards it. Apart from the blatant [racial discrimination] that Poul receives, they don't have opinions about anything else.They are like:Oh, look, the streets smell like [unpleasant thing that smells bad]. Well, it is what it is.Oh, look, people look at me as if I were an [intellectually challenged person] because I don't know these useless and overly complicated manners. Well, I guess it's my bad. I'll learn.Oh, look, races are separated by hair color and skin color. Well, I don't care, I'm not going to investigate it. I'll just work for 300 chapters to produce more air brakes.I understand that the characters have to adapt, and it's the smart choice, but I feel that the MCs don't have any conviction towards their past lives and 21th Century beliefs. They act as if they were commoners in that world that suddenly gained knowledge from another world, instead of actually being highly educated transmigrators from our era. They just accept things, and we aren't explained why they accept it. It's just weird, and it feels like they are empty. I don't know how to describe it.The dialogues are sometimes too specific or weirdly structured. Instead of something being explained through the narrator, the characters explain it. But sometimes, it's obviously structured so that we, as readers, can understand it, which makes the dialogue weird because nobody would talk like that. It's like they are reading a presentation/script.Also, the MCs act too respectful, let's better say "agreeable

this has a been one of the more entertaining yandere novels I have read in a while.plz update soon

grammar is worse than mtl its the thing that made me stop reading this.decent potential but you need an editor and proof-reader/////

Based on the premise, this kind of stories shouldn't even be translated.One more story which is only an excuse for MC to do lewd stuff with objectified women.

severely disappointed so I give you a happy little 1 star for ruining the story in less than 10 chapters . and now I'm filling up space so I can post.

The story is written amazingly the world is well done and the author did a very good job bring it to life the plot is well done also. Keep up the good work author!!.

I really like this author, this book and marvel elysium are pinnacle op protagonist books

"Huh? Uhm… Were you not informed?" The landlady placed her hands over her mouth, as if to show that she made a terrible slip up. She's wearing a complicated face, a sorry expression.