A wonderful novel on par with Cuttlefish's other works. However this wonderful novel is marred by the translation. The novel was dropped by webnovel and the translation is incomplete. The translation quality was also subpar along the way. Truly a shame how webnovel didn't give this novel the respect it deserves. His other novel, Martial Arts Master, also suffered from terrible TL quality but at least was fully translated.
The idea behind this story is good and I'm of the opinion that if the author keeps with the story to completion then they will have a fantastic first draft.That said the author tells the readers what's happening rather showing. This doesn't allow the reader to deeply immerse themselves in the story. I think this also contributes to the pacing problems of the story.Over all if you don't mind that this is a fledgling author then I believe this to be a promising story and hope the author will continue writing it.
The Best Cultivation Novel Out there, except for the stupid action at the beginning of the novel which is negligible. Just hope that he doesn't chase MIL F around, just go for pure maiden
Another great novel more update for this one i'll be updating myself with these. I'm not used to reading harem novel but with the system plus kingdom building then this one is for me and you.. Please support the author to continue writing these novel. Thanks Again.
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