The Chronicles of the Ancient Star

I’ve had the pleasure of reading this authors other work! An amazing hidden talent in this platform! I hope this story blows up!!! Love all the characters and the plot is so good!

One of the most frustrating read. Nonexistent character development for so many chapters then a sudden change. if you gonna do it like that do it in as few chapters as possible. Character development that takes many chapters must show gradual change. not an abrupt one.

Overall I I like the novel, it’s something new and I think it has big potential, however I would like it if you help Chelsea or join them in someway. (Personal request)