After i read a few chapters i really like your story. your theme really got me interested to read more chapters. but if i can critique your book, there are some misspellings in terms of punctuation. I hope that in the future it will be better
It had been 1 week since the Dragon's fight against the Phoenix, since Klaus noticed that his strength was very small and he was very weak, and with determination, he began to train seriously. Since then he has started cultivating, rocking trees and lifting weights and performing some of the missions the system has given him.
"I suppose you remember the sphere of perception during our time as an Aether hatchling. Using the standard measurement system I saw in your memories, the original radius of perception was about 9.91 meters, for easier visualization, let's call it 10 meters. It then grew to... about 15, then to 20. Basically each consumption increases it by approximately 5. Right before we ate the 9th Aether hatchling, it was 50. Then after the process of ascension took place, it doubled. Now it is 100."
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