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  1. Phaeron
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    Judging by the hole in the satellite picture
  1. JJFrancis3kJ
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    The Mad Titan stood from his throne, storming passed his underling as he muttered, "I think it's time we remind the universe just what we are. Call on the entire Black Order, gather our forces outside of Knowhere's system. The campaign for the Infinity Stones begins today."
  1. chichi32310
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    Peak villain mc novel!!! So happy to finally see a true villain mc when all those authors have been putting the villain tag on for false advertisements, this novel ain’t for snowflakes only for the villain enjoyers 11/10 would recommend
  1. FreyaJocelyn
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    slow update still learning about the world with the mc
  1. AmandaMaddenRYV
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    Vivid, engaging and yet thoughtful. The author enthralls me with their worldbuilding. I can't wait for more chapters. Will surely add this to my library and wait for updates.
  1. Unsamani
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    This book have many of its own unique setting such as beast, goddess, and many races. I can only say it was a good good book with interesting plot.Just why I’ve see author using “he” and “she” on the same character 🫠Because of your update stability shocked me, imma give you a pizza 🍕, hope your novel got better and remember get enough rest before you start writing.
  1. MisterBombastic
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    Review: A Frustrating Missed OpportunityThis novel promises a dynamic journey through unique leveling mechanics and high-stakes magic, yet it ultimately falters due to the protagonist’s baffling decisions and squandered potential.### Squandered Potential and Poor Strategic ChoicesThe core issue lies in the protagonist's persistent self-sabotage. Despite having the means to rapidly ascend in power—earning exponential XP and accessing formidable skills—he opts for trivial tasks that yield minimal rewards. Instead of harnessing his abilities to grow stronger and secure key allies, he wastes valuable opportunities, making his progression feel intentionally handicapped.### Disappointing Character DevelopmentThe character’s lack of foresight is particularly glaring when compared to supporting figures. For instance, a side character—an angel of justice—demonstrates significant potential from the outset, while the main character remains embarrassingly stagnant. His obsession with minor details and a restrictive, counterproductive playstyle transforms what should be an epic journey into a series of missed opportunities.### Narrative Incoherence and FrustrationRather than presenting a coherent, engaging narrative, the story devolves into a frustrating display of wasted time and underutilized abilities. The protagonist’s fixation on low-value tasks detracts from the tension and excitement that the story could have offered. Instead, readers are left with a protagonist who seems intent on limiting his own progress.### Lackluster Writing and Redundant ExpositionBeyond its flawed character choices, the novel suffers from a writing style that is both over-expository and repetitive. Key information is dragged out over multiple chapters—as if one chapter weren’t enough—resulting in redundant and monotonous storytelling. This overabundance of exposition not only disrupts the narrative flow but also makes the reading experience unnecessarily tedious.### Final ThoughtsThe novel’s failure is not due to a lack of creative world-building or intriguing mechanics but rather the protagonist’s chronic inability to leverage his strengths and a writing style that bogs down the narrative. His self-imposed limitations and illogical decisions, compounded by a repetitively overdone exposition, turn what could have been an engaging ascent to power into a cautionary tale of wasted potential.For readers seeking a smart, well-paced fantasy adventure with characters who evolve strategically, this novel may prove to be a deeply disappointing experience.

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