The boy's gasp sounded like he was really enjoying it while Shi Jieyi felt as if a rod had become stuck inside her belly. It made her feel very uncomfortable. She supported her legs on the seat and raised her buttocks up, but that meat rod was still stuck inside her flower bud. Each of her movements seemed to tug at her flower bud and made her lower body feel sore as well as numb. She sat down again, causing his member to thrust inside her flower bud once more, making her whole body tense up. She sobbed instantly after that, "Dear Tianlong... I beg you... please... pull it out a little... my stomach is going to... get skewered..."
I know this book might seem similar to others you’ve read—maybe it even shares some familiar tropes—but let me assure you, it’s not the same. This story has a real sense of direction, so it might feel a bit slow at times. That’s because it’s not just about constant leveling up, blowing up planets, or seducing people (honestly, I don’t even know how to write that last part, so you’re safe there!). I’ve put effort into building a solid plot, so please be patient—you’re in for a lot!
I love your writing style and how easy it is to read. As a writer, the best way is to show and not tell the reader and you did exactly that. Great job, author!
Very Interesting so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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