I'm putting my 2 cents in.it will take roughly 16.5 years to CATCH UP with the novel so who knows how long until it ends? not many people will be interested because of that which may result in the novel being dropped midway through anyways. 5 ch/wk for a novel this big is just a tease.
Ok. This novel might be you first so I won't be critisising your writing..seriously ,though, it's fine putting none cannon transformations,but saying that freeza has trillions in power level and saying that the MC was shocked unconscious for a year while having millions in PL is just garbage bull****.FIX THE POWER LEVELS.Also I think that your progressing the novel too quick.had a nice "overpowered MC" idea at the start but it turned out sh*t
Looks good, I hope it gets continued. At least it’s a bit different then the usual translated novel on this app. Sometime you can find really good gems while other times… well, you might as well be reading the same story over and over again. Here’s to hoping this is one of those gems 🤞
I just gotten to know reading past the mother daughter killing. It made me feel frustrated. I thought you mean controlled by the knife or losing some kind of emotion don't know. but he somehow have feelings for Julie. Who wipe the floor with his sorry ass literally and he doesn't have any kind of emotion to this act actually he likes. not feeling somehow how we know he feel pain in his heart when he tries to escape after they figure out he is the killer and confront Julie I just can't continue Reading after I read this this kind of b******* no offence to the author but I'm really frustrated. you should use some kind of spaces to move the paragraphs because I'm using text to speech to listen to The story . And this is my first review on this site.
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You ever gonna pick this up author? I wouldn’t even mind like a 100 - 200 page short story. Just so we can see some connection to your other novel which I also enjoy! Thanks
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