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DIEVERGENT
- Joined
- July 1,2024
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It is avery good story about friendship and that PSVS also liked blue that account is my big bro acc he liked it and he kept it for fun. But the book is very good
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Hello everyone! For those who have read from the first chapters released, know that I cut the first 9 chapters to make the story flow more smoothly. Let me know what you think! Don't worry, I will introduce Niko's past later!Thanks for your attention and happy reading to all!
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This is something new, to be honest. A world of superheroes and villains… perfect. I didn’t expect that and now I’m glued to it. The use of abilities is also interesting, with users of such abilities become an embodiment of the ability themselves, like elementals. My only problem is that it seems like the some scenarios in the story are too described, but anyway it’s good… no epic.
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can you add images to help visualize it more in other chapters?
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Are you dead since you haven't uploaded for some time?
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ok, I'm 4 chapters in and so far this have being the novel most similar to written "corn". So far it's like as a reader your shoe a situation that ends on spicy time, with just the minimum explanation. I may change my review if someone tells me that that there's some real plot somewhere to be found
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Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
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Wily Kairos 😏Okay, so I've read up to the latest chapter as of now—chapter 7—and so far it's actually good. Some motivation for Kairos' character is also starting to show. Would see how this goes further on. 👌
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This is my first work, but I'm open to Criticism please feel free to give suggestions or opinions I will try to work harder for every readers to enjoy my novel
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Brother this is wild,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,You got me hooked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Your novel has potential,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Dear Author,So far I'm liking what I'm reading. I'm loving the flow of the story specially the details haha. Though what I can suggest is that try to put in more content, specially the first few chapters— but that's just for me though I guess I'm just kinda used to reading books that have 2k or more words per chapter.Anyways so far I like what I'm reading and I hope the author continues on with writing not only to finish this wonderful work but also to work on more books as well in the future.(u2060。u2060・u2060ωu2060・u2060。u2060)u2060ノu2060♡Much Love,Loki
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I read all the chapters. and i liked them, So i thought i should leave a review for others tp read the story. it's good
Kikai Megami Sura-chan no Shiiku Nikki