Supreme Monarch

Author here.

I hope this story is to your liking, and I apologise for the slow update. I just wanted to do longer chapters so it takes longer to write and edit... Would appreciate a vote or comment and any constructive criticism is welcomed.

Suggestions are appreciated and may find their way into a side plot or storyline so please. Thanks

This is a work of real high quality. The chapters are long but cover a whole lot of ground and incorporate some excellent characters and world building. The pacing is spot on and grips the reader right from the opening chapter. Prose is colorful, original and flows really well. You can tell the work has undergone some edits as typos are almost non-existent and the sentences are structured really well. The story is still developing at the stage I am up to, but I am certainly hooked at this point and will continue with this one till the end. Top quality entertainment. A really solid novel!

I like the plot and characters a lot but the author has the habit of over-explaining everything. A lot of the chapters are just random explaining of things that really have nothing to do with the plot in any way. There is also the constant pov changes for seemingly no reason. Instead of developing the mc we are focusing on two side characters before we even know what is going on plot-wise. It's extremely frustrating.

With just the title, it seemed to have potential. Looking great with just the title and cover. The synopsis made me hooked instantly, it captivated my heart. Reading a few chapters, the flow was nice and not choppy to read. The author was talented so the novel was in good hands! Cheers!

I love the beginning of the story and cant wait to see how it progresses.

But there were a few boring chapters and uninteresting fights. The mc lets people force themselves onto him, which I dislike( not demon lord behavior). Most of the subordinates either will desire revenge or help with their personnel problems dragging the mc into more troublesome situations. All I can foresee is the mc playing hero or recruiting more baggage. There are also times the mc seems stupid and takes unnecessary decisions/actions.

Can't wait for more...

Chapters are long and engaging, really love the direction the story is going. I'm guess the prelude happens sometime in the future so I really want to see how the mc builds up himself and gathers his generals.... This is fun and I hope many others give it a try so author can keep going

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That's a cool story with a cool cover and name. Looking forward to see how the story unravels! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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