Supreme Monarch

Hey Author awesome work here! I like the story very much and the world is also made very nicely. But there are some points I would like to share-

- The change in MC's body made him very good at analyzing things. But when he encounters the odd changes in his body and the people following him, his mind goes blank. Like, he puts all the strange things happening to the back of his mind saying that he doesn't have much information. He should at least try and analyze what's happening and should come to some conclusions and theories as to what he might be and what's happening in his surroundings.

- And in the story it feels like as if the MC is being dragged around by some strange fate into various troublesome issues without his control. I mean, till now it's fine since he doesn't have 'Magic Sense' so can't tell if anything troublesome is happening ahead. But sometimes it feels as if he is being forcefully dragged in these situations which he solves with his brute strength and doesn't try to understand what might've caused them and thus creating an uproar in the circle of the upper echelons of the world (They'll send their spies and assassins and track the moves of MC without him knowing and solves various problems easily causing them shock). And he also lets everybody follow him saying he felt flustered and didn't know what to say so let them follow him. Please don't make this into one of those novels where wherever the MC goes he gets into trouble without knowing. At least let him understand the trouble and let him decide whether to act on it. I mean let him have his own will when joining troublesome situations. Also let him understand his own strength and don't think that he is very weak and all just like those Japanese Novels (just my opinion). He shouldn't just get dragged into the his minions/side characters/FMC's troubles every time. Just don't make this into a cliché where MC solves every trouble unknowingly and saves the world.
BTW if there's someone or something controlling his fate then it's OK.

All in all these were just my opinions and the book till now was very AWESOME!! KEEP IT IP!! [img=recommend]

The thing I really enjoy is the interactions between the characters, it makes them come to life. The story is also quite exciting and I love your writing.

A very magnificent plotline. Reading the blurb I was thinking this was going to be similar to Solo levelling but I was completely wrong. The plot and the style of writing are amazing and everything is well crafted! I'd even say it's better than solo levelling!

The story has been pretty interesting so far. I think I would recommend it to others. I don't know what else to put so have a great day everyone

This novel is awesome! I like the way the author is writing. I have been already hooked up with the synopsis and the beginning of this novel. The plot is also intriguing and interesting at the same time. I would recommend you to give this novel a try, it is definitely worth it! Good Job, Author.

This is a really great read!
The story is well paced, and the quality of writing is one of the best I have seen for a while, which made it really enjoyable to read!
The characters are dynamic and entertaining, and the overall reading was really immersive.
The chapters are a little long, but still excellent nonetheless!
Amazing work Author!

Hello author, I saw harem tag in this novel and I havent read this novel yet.
I have some question is the MC a demon? if  yes, then will his wives be a demon or human?
  I just hope its not human so its unique :)

The Mc is extremely dumb again and again
dangerous fight somewhere... he must go there to die
something is strange with his body .... he doesnt care
and such