Honestly, it is hard for me to even rate it this highly. The english, grammar, and writing quality itself is subpar. The author really needs another person to go over his work. Its so bad it feels like a draft instead of the final work. The setting changes on a wim and the author seems to forget to tell us some info so we find it later. Almost seems like he is making it up as he goes. Its worse with the skills that are just deplorable how thought out and how badly it is used. None of the skills show proficiency, none of the monsters have a name other than monster until the author feels like it. Then there is the point of messed up names for the classes. The author seems to alive that the mcs class is something like a middle ground for supporters like a sorcerer or something but calls it a magician then another student has the magician class that isn’t support. The f is going on with the classes. Then u can just forget understanding the dialogue between characters bc the authors grammar fails to even explain what’ going on. Basically it is a novel that has an interesting concept that falls short on even the grammar much less the forced plot, and forced characters that are one dimensional ina way I thought wasn’t possible. Then there is the lack of world building that just limits the story even more.
that is a f***ing Interesting idea for a story premiseif this story has decent adversaries and predicaments, then we are gold........,............ .................................mmm
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A very interesting book with an original,well-constructed idea and a flow with a steady pace. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys reading novels about technology and games,with a hint of romance. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious
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