"My, that was quite interesting for a lady to do." I jumped in scare and took out my blade knife almost stabbing the person but that person held my wrist.
Its been 3 hours since detective George agreed to take the mission and he was know back in the same pub as before talking to the a mysterious figure "Do you have what I asked for" George said the man then looked around and handed him a piece of paper "This is all I could find out" George took the paper and quickly stuffed it away "Thanks for your help" As George walked by he slipped a small packet into the mans pocket and he also walks away and they both go there separate ways.
Feng Yu Heng slightly frowned. She figured that Feng Jin Yuan would clean up all of Feng Zi Hao's blemishes. But hearing the two pages mention the girls were only ten years old, who knew what methods Feng Zi Hao used to lure them in. Although it was said to take care of them, it was just another way of saying to kill them. But for these people who were condemned to die, if they could be of use, it would always be better than dying with grievances.
I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try.So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader. The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action. The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way.The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive.Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any.Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room).As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed.I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.
The plot is very nice especially the mimicry skill, however can you make the system notification short when mc uses his skills, you can just do it like -5.This is all I need to understand since I already know how much MP the mc had.There might be people who wont be able to do math but you can tell them more shortly through mc's thoughts like he had this much MP remaining so he cant use skill too many times and must finish before he is exhausted.Also I am reader of third person pov so I would really like if you like in TPP rather FPP.Nevertheless a very good story and got me hooked.
I personally really love this, soo much that I've read it all in a matter of hours. This is such a nice refreshing story from all the generic and cliche story developments and outcomes that come with this type of genre. I hope the author keeps developing this novel amazingly and can't wait to see more stories to be written by you in the future, if there will be any.
This novel is out of this world ngl, I personally live the world building and this OP FUTURE, I MEAN THEY GOT EVERYTHING, the only thing I haven't seen a SUN IN A BOM BOX but hey everything else is there, EVEN AN ANTIMATTER BOMB💀.Overall I have enjoyed this novel and I have to say, AUTHOR BETTER KEEP WRITING, CAUSE MAN YOU ARE GOATED.
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