Stay away from me Mr. Ex-Moon

The novel really started well and promising, but turned to the worse. Characters were not developed, the world become too wide, but doesn't posses depth at all, areas are there just to pass through and forget about them. Things which the MC learns and gather are not used, aside from maybe once or twice in the following Chapters.MC gets progressively stronger and meets progressively stronger enemies, which he beats easily by his overwhelming experience from past life, good looking girls swarm to him ... and that's basically it.Could've been great, turned into a train-wreck in my opinion.Translation is very good, updates are really slow, story is basically a circle, characters aside from MC are nonexistent and even he is a cliche in therms of OP MC due to reincarnation basing all of his motives, moves and decision on his past life and nothing turn out of the expected.World background is on decent level, but never developed more then the passing presence of the MC, which aside from the start is usually very short.Would not suggest to any reader, aside from those who really are into the cliche of OP, reincarnation and harem.

This series... oh boy. Where do I even begin?Pros:- BADASS MC- Face Smacking!- Great side-characters- Good story- Ok story development- Ok character developmentCons:- Slow story start- EXTREMELY angelic MC- EXTREMELY dense MC- Many many side characters

The story is absurd. I am currently at chapter 110 and all I can say is this story is a waste of brain cells. Not going to suggest this story to anyone.It starts with a scenario similar to Everyone else is a returnee. But that's it. The story just goes off tangent and stops making any sense.To give you an idea I will briefly explain what the **** has me ranting about. MC is a loner invisible guy. Time stops and he is left alone. He spends 300 years acting as an idiot. Instead of training his skill or enjoying himself, all you find him is crying about his past and how he seems to forget everything. Fine. We can understand that MC is depressed and so on. But 300 years? And let's not forget all the time skips. Author just out of nowhere drops a time skip. 10 yeast passed, they practiced for 20 years...it's annoying.And then you have the author mucking about. She's trying for comedic effects, but he is trying so hard that all that comes out is depression. God Realm where the arc stops making any sense. It's so wrong....I don't even know what to say. You have mind locks, NPCs and other stuff which just DO NOT merge well into the story.And when people do come alive the story just goes bat **** insane. Do you remember how hard was it to find magic stones? Well, the story starts and you have 'The player who first entered the game.'Do you get it? Player who entered the game. You don't have people awakening and then hyperventilating because every thing is wrong. Nope. It's a game . The first player than purchases magic stones, few million magic stones mind you. WTF? Are you writing a VR game novel or are you talking about real world. You don't have anyone rioting, crying, screaming. No cults preaching Apocalypse. No military efforts to bring every thing in control. No common man trying to kill himself because he just list everything. Nope. It's just another day. Everything is normal. People immediate adapted to this whole fucking game world. You already have guild and villages. Hunters using mechas and what not. Like seriously?If all you wanted was a game world then why didn't the **** you just created a VR novel. No sense of realism.And if that wasn't enough. The same MC who was crying for his crush and his parents, didn't even think about visiting them. It's not like I wish he would. But what's with all this inconsistent character development. After chapter 100, when people awaken, the MC starts acting like an NPC. Which honestly makes no sense. If it was like they legendary Mechanic where he acted like NPC to earn benefits, I could under. But this ...rubbish.All I cay say is : Waste of time. It's just around 250 chapters long but I was already feeling drowsy 100 chapters in. The stupid change was just the final hammer.Not going to suggest this story. Ever.

The story is good and the author knows how to sprinkle some humor in it, the author's description of events is excellent and the plot itself is interesting.

now that i have become addicted to the novel, i will have to wait for the release ... sad the life of a reader waiting for the author to release chapters .... sigh.The novel is incredible with good potency, but I hope the author is not discouraged as many do

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Everyone retorted on their minds in the midst of this chaos. How could they not? Her words are simply ridiculous. Or should they say, she was being too capricious from the start?