So Tempting to My Heart

Bruh I swear to god if this doesn't get picked then I'll lose all hope in trial reads. Decent concept, and the system does not make the MC too OP. There are some translation mistakes, but they are very rare even in the first 20 chaps...

heyo crazy cronie here,review on 27/01/2021 @chap170review divided in: Short reviewLong reviewRatingsConclusionshort review: You want a villain mc? this is the novel you are searching for... long review: pros: 1) I just love action scenes. I am someone who skims thru action scenes in most of the novels... But here I read most of the action scenes. Author kept it short and easy to understand scenes.2) In most of the novels by now people would be clear about the "world". But here author kept the mystery building but at the same time explains slowly about the world and just doesn't dump info. Everything here makes sense and nothing is "illogical" as of now...3) author walks the talk!! The story is exactly what synopsis said unlike other novels where story changes after 100-200 chaps. 4) characters all feel real.. the side characters, the "villains

I don't what you have edited and not... but I see there is no more requirements to rewrite the first seven chapters. It simply keeps people hooked and have suspense, thing I liked the most is that the gaming dump wasn't included in first few chapters. Like it's annoying but your story is vivid and full of emotions. I have a lot to learn...keep up!

The story is interesting and it flows steadily and naturally.  The characters are alive and behaving realistically. You did a good job you with all these detailed descriptions. I will keep an eye on this work! Good job! Keep it up!

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Author buddy i think you should stop writing this novel too and try improving your writng skills and logic even more.the charecters of the people are too shallow, almost one dimensional.and if there are immortals in that world this idiot selling things like cleansing elixir as a weakling will only result in those immortals kidnapping him,torturing him,getting info from him,then finally dissecting his brain to look for abnormalities.and your world background is terrible.i hope you can atleast reach the minimum standards of a proper author by the time of your next novel if you dont give up by then.Goodluck.

uhhh.... ummm..... tuhhhhhh...... phtauuuuuhhhh......mnn uhhhh...... bduhhhh...... bgahh....,...uhhhh mnuhhhh..I don't know what to write but uhhh, it's a  good novel and you should definitely read it?

it's truly a shame that jks decided to drop this absolute masterpiece, I have fallen in love with it even more than mvs and it's my favorite out of all his works, his new level up zombie ain't for me too, I wish he would work on this instead of thst