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story line is good quite unique in its own way 😉 so i am placing my hopes in it so pls carry it till end i quite like how u describe the world in its dark way and relationship of siblings instead of mc going here and there picking girls so I hope u won't drop it before ending it it will break the heart of many including mine

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Has some standard stuff in it's world building and some cliché. I like how a lot of the leveling and ranking works similar to reincarnation of the strongest sword god. The spelling and grammar messed up a few times but it got a bit better in later chapters. The way skills and some items worked weren't really fleshed out in the beginning but it has gotten better and things seem to have more explanations which is good. Overall pretty good novel so far.

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I'm not too familiar with system novels bcz I haven't read a lot of them. I know they're currently mainstream but this one doesn't fall very short. I've read a few chapters now and I decided it's about time I gave a review on it.Synopsis: Not bad. It's detailed enough to get the reader to understand what the book is about and it doesn't betray your expectations.Writing Quality: This isn't bad but it isn't perfect either when it comes to grammar. The word choices are okay and it's fluent enough for anyone to read. However, I noticed a few missing punctuation marks, run-on sentences, and sometimes unnecessary wording. I know it can be difficult to get your English perfect because it is a tricky language but the grammar isn't bad by any means. It isn't perfect but it's FAR from unreadable. Good work.Story Development: IMO, this isn't bad. As stated before, I haven't seen many system novels because they aren't exactly my cup of teaching (Apart from Solo leveling. That was fire🔥 lol). However, from what I've seen, the book at the very least has potential. It's just up to the author to do what he can to bring out the full potential of this book. Many will gravitate to it if this is done right. I am certain of that.Character Design: I don't usually mark for this because it's up to the reader's preferences sometimes, whether or not they want described characters or if they wish to use their imagination. However, I'm a fan of descriptive writing. It brings flair and pizazz. Updating Stability: From what I've seen so far, updates are constant enough. The author doesn't lag very much. Readers will appreciate that.World Background: IMO, could use a little more flavor. I hope I'm not forgetting anything cause I tend to have a forgetful memory when it comes to smaller details. However, the world background isn't bad but it could use more. As stated before, I'm a fan of descriptive writing so yeah.Overall: This book isn't bad and it has potential without a doubt. Currently, to be 100% honest, it doesn't seem all that binge-worthy to me as I could hardly find much motivation to read more than 2 chapters a day (But don't let this bother you. Few books give me that binge-worthy feeling). However, as stated before, the book has potential and the author seems creative enough to go further. Readers, support the author and you'll have a FANTASTIC story. Message to the author: I know writing can be difficult, speaking from my experiences. However, don't give up. If you enjoy writing then keep at it and you'll get better without a shadow of the doubt. You'll sometimes see collections fluctuate. Today you might gain 3 then tomorrow you lose 4. But that's all part of the process. Don't be afraid of going back through older chapters and making adjustments if you deem it necessary. And most of all, don't give up. Remember this always; if you don't like the story you're writing then there's a high chance that the readers won't either. So have confidence and good luck!

"He didn't chicken out." Gev nonchalantly said.

<p>"So... me... 3% ha.... Cayden is my room mate and friend... I only know how to study... spent my vacation here to get work hours added to my marks...." Xander said as he stumbled along with his words. Ariana rolled her eyes. </p>